Tail Plug

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Kovy

Kovy #1 · Aug 25th, 2014 · · · I Said What What ·

OMG HA HA HA BEST STORIE EVER!!! Ha ha

Kovy

Kovy #2 · Aug 25th, 2014 · · 1 · I Said What What ·

Intill I read it a few grammer problems
Is all and this is what people masturbate to

Bysen

Bysen #3 · Aug 25th, 2014 · · · I Said What What ·

4903432 There are certain moments where my inner writer put bits of extra story that could make this longer but honestly when I found this I just wanted to finish it off.
But who knows, depending on the reception this gets I may continue the series. Luna knows I have ideas. For example: actually doing ANYTHING with Rarity.
Also, I meant Rarity was the one who jumped their bones. And looked something like this in the process

Regidar

Regidar #4 · Aug 25th, 2014 · 1 · · I Said What What ·

I giggled.

Nice job ohpee

goaway

goaway #5 · Aug 25th, 2014 · · · I Said What What ·

Still a few problems here and there, but was a fun story.

Stormy Skies

Stormy Skies #6 · Aug 25th, 2014 · · 1 · Bonus scene ·

Story inspired by two stippers...

Might want to fix that.

me and my friend

And that

Two fairly basic errors in the description does not inspire confidence, but I'll read this anyway...

Bysen

Bysen #7 · Aug 25th, 2014 · · · Bonus scene ·

4904307 The first one: I'll fix that.
Second one: I refuse to say 'friend and I'.

Stormy Skies

Stormy Skies #8 · Aug 25th, 2014 · · 3 · Bonus scene ·

4904470
Remove the second person in the sentence to see if you should use me or I.

...me came to the conclusion was wearing a tail plug as part of her 'costume'.

But you are free to do whatever you like with your description.

And overall the story is okay, but in serious need of an editing pass.

PegasusMesa

PegasusMesa #9 · Aug 26th, 2014 · 2 · · I Said What What ·

I managed to correct all the drunken ipad on a bus grammar and bad wording.

You missed a bit.

Cerulean Starlight

Cerulean Starlight #10 · Sep 18th, 2014 · 1 · · Bonus scene ·

ahahahaha oh man the bonus scene's hilarious

The Vault Tech

The Vault Tech #11 · Mar 17th, 2015 · 1 · 1 · Bonus scene ·

I hate you, Bysen.

MythrilMoth

MythrilMoth #12 · May 7th, 2015 · 3 · 2 · Bonus scene ·

So your "cover art" is an ass shot of two cosplayers at a con who I'm guessing you probably never got permission from to use their rear ends as cover art for your story.

Yyyyyyyeah...

Bysen