no comments now that's a surprise. I hope that you continue to churn out these chapters its been a great story to follow. I once heard an analyst say that because DT and SS only existed as conflict for the CMC the characters would only see redemption later in their lives (if the writers wanted to redeem them at all). Aura is a great character to have in this story, a pony who will never let DT forget the kind of pony she once was, but in her pursuit to take down the one she see's as evil what kind of monster will Aura turn herself into?
It's odd to see all these sides of Diamond Tiara lined up together. Great chapter as it shows the struggle between the different sides of Diamond Tiara and the middle ground that she currently occupies.
5022066 Featherweight went to get help, and she was near the path that help was going to take. If she was near enough to see it, she was probably near enough to be seen, so the rescue party could save them if they got there before the Manticore came back.
That's the most likely way for her to be saved, anyway.
Hmm...interesting on seeing the different sides of DT's mind all lined up here. Although, now I'm wondering what's going to happen next. That cry of pain didn't sound good. Good chapter and I look forward to the next one.
5023780 That's an interpretation of Suri that's been floating around since the episode aired, I mean their color schemes kind of match as do their personalities. For me it has become kind of my headcanon.
This is one of those rare moments where I wish this chapter had been longer. Guessing pain must be bringing her back to consciousness or something. Shame. Wanted to see more of: derpicdn.net/img/2014/9/16/723616/large.png Pony POV series is pretty awesome.
I should probably head back to bed. But may as well leave a comment. I wonder if there ain't no surgical magic to remove scars. Heaven knows Tiara can get the bits for it. :P
See you next chapter! (the one where we see if Rumble becomes Timber food and if Tiara ends up needing a peg leg xD)
"Are you going to stay in the guard, continue to risk your life, and possibly keep getting hurt? Doing so would also mean giving up on trying to help others so much and possibly making amends for what you did when you were her"
Not sure if I understand that last sentence. She won't be helping people if she stays in he guard?
"You're not dead, but you're on the brink. Right now, anything could happen to send you one way or the other."
Oh dear.
"I," Business Tiara said, "am how you picture yourself after taking over Barnyard Bargains for your father. A successful business mare who has made things bigger, better, and more profitable than ever..." her eyes narrowed. "... Even if it meant that some ponies had to pay for it." She grinned, looking more like a shark than a pony.
Oh dear.
"Lonely," Diamond Tiara stated. She waved a hoof at the leaving foals. "Look at them. They don't want to hang out with us. They don't want to bask in our wealth and power. They don't care what we have to say, so long as they aren't the target of whatever toxic venom we want to spew."
Hm.
"We had one friend," Diamond Tiara continued, "one real friend who wanted to hang out with us. "So what did we do? Pretend we didn't care. Claim they weren't hanging out with us because we rejected them. They weren't cool enough or whatever."
I'm getting a distinct Ghost of Christmas Past vibe.
"That's wonderful," Tiara's mother said, moving closer. "Listen. Mommy is going to be going away on a long trip, m'kay? I've decided to go to Manehattan and become a fashion designer." With a smile, she adjusted her hair. "Now, I know you're going to miss me, but don't worry, m'kay? Once everything is up and running, I can come back to Ponyville and the fashionistas will all come to me. In the mean time, I'll write to you every week, and you will get to come and visit me in the summer. Doesn't that sound wonderful?"
Oh god, Diamond Tiara's mother is Suri Polomare? That, actually makes a scary amount of sense.
So, *now* she's dead. And being eaten by a Manticore while just conscious enough to feel pain.
Oh, don't give me that look. She totally deserves it.
no comments now that's a surprise. I hope that you continue to churn out these chapters its been a great story to follow. I once heard an analyst say that because DT and SS only existed as conflict for the CMC the characters would only see redemption later in their lives (if the writers wanted to redeem them at all). Aura is a great character to have in this story, a pony who will never let DT forget the kind of pony she once was, but in her pursuit to take down the one she see's as evil what kind of monster will Aura turn herself into?
It's odd to see all these sides of Diamond Tiara lined up together. Great chapter as it shows the struggle between the different sides of Diamond Tiara and the middle ground that she currently occupies.
I half expect the total cop-out of Aura saving her. Then again, Dinky might just show up and save Rumble, and DT as long as she's at it.
5022066 Honestly yeah I think that's most likely if Diamond survives she's gonna get rescued by Dinky because she nearly died trying to save Rumble.
Her mother is, is… I forgot the name.
5022066 Featherweight went to get help, and she was near the path that help was going to take. If she was near enough to see it, she was probably near enough to be seen, so the rescue party could save them if they got there before the Manticore came back.
That's the most likely way for her to be saved, anyway.
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Suri Polomare?
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Yes her.
5021919 img.pandawhale.com/79434-Putin-cookie-meme-pqor.jpeg Because you are one twisted dude
The Happening at Owl Creek Bridge.
Hmm...interesting on seeing the different sides of DT's mind all lined up here. Although, now I'm wondering what's going to happen next. That cry of pain didn't sound good. Good chapter and I look forward to the next one.
~ Super-Brony12
DT's mom is Suri Polomare.
That explains so much that it should be canon.
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That's an interpretation of Suri that's been floating around since the episode aired, I mean their color schemes kind of match as do their personalities. For me it has become kind of my headcanon.
This is one of those rare moments where I wish this chapter had been longer. Guessing pain must be bringing her back to consciousness or something. Shame. Wanted to see more of:
derpicdn.net/img/2014/9/16/723616/large.png
Pony POV series is pretty awesome.
I should probably head back to bed. But may as well leave a comment. I wonder if there ain't no surgical magic to remove scars. Heaven knows Tiara can get the bits for it. :P
See you next chapter!
(the one where we see if Rumble becomes Timber food and if Tiara ends up needing a peg leg xD)
Pretends to care.
I found these two sentences a tad confusing:
"Are you going to stay in the guard, continue to risk your life, and possibly keep getting hurt? Doing so would also mean giving up on trying to help others so much and possibly making amends for what you did when you were her"
Not sure if I understand that last sentence. She won't be helping people if she stays in he guard?
Oh, Karl Jung would be having a field day with all these archetypes running around!
deserves
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I love DT stories. They're always well done, and this one is no exception. Good show!
I await the next chapter.
good chapter I'd hate to see the other paths my life could of been it would be really depressing.
Oh dear.
Oh dear.
Hm.
I'm getting a distinct Ghost of Christmas Past vibe.
Oh god, Diamond Tiara's mother is Suri Polomare? That, actually makes a scary amount of sense.
Damn, with DT's mom being Suri, no wonder she was screwed up.
wrong with you
Technically 'phantasmal' is proper, but phantasmic is okay, apparently