at first..i was a little turned away from this Story..especially with who its about..iv never liked diamond tiara or silver spooon..for obvious reasons but..i figured why not..lets see were the story goes. im interested to say the least Diamond Tiara is in for one hell of a shock when she hits basic training lol
I'm actually rooting for Di now. Huh. I like her spunk, and I'm genuinely hopeful she's found what she wanted. I'm looking forward to this and how it will tur out, especially what her dad has to say about this spontaneous whim of hers.
"That's for Princess Luna's guards in Canterlot. It's probably easier to join here since there are fewer volunteers. Plus, I doubt everypony that wants to join the guard trains for years beforehoof. If they did, the guard wouldn't need to train them once they joined."
I'm going to become the Captain of the Guard, dattebayo!
I really want to see DT rise to the task. This is well-written, and the third chapter is making me look forward to the entire story. If you can keep a good character arc, I'll be hooked like deep sea bass.
Diamond Tiara joining the EUP Guard Ground Forces? She's in for an enormous shock in terms of life-style and how ponies treat her. On the other hoof, if she makes it through Basic, a whole new world is opening up before her!
Diamond Tiara smiled back and held out her hoof. Spoon reached out with her own to tap it. "Bump!" the pair said together. While the pair may had left most of their signature hoofshake behind as they grew older, the two friends could not abandon it completely.
Heh. That's cute, I do like stories that show DT are more than just a bully when she grows up, but as an actual pony, not a mere caricature.
"Well..." she said as she considered the question. "You have always been good at finding a ponies weakness and how to use it to your advantage. Plus you definitely know how to tell others what to do." Diamond Tiara could not help but grin. Silver Spoon had always been capable of diplomacy. That was the nicest way anypony could possibly describe her bullying and being bossy.
Indeed.
"But you've never actually been in a fight," Silver Spoon continued, "and I'm pretty sure you have no training in it."
Same.
"It's decided, then," Diamond Tiara proclaimed as she grabbed her lunch. "Today after school, I will sign up to join The Royal Guard for Princess Twilight, and begin training as soon as I graduate." She grinned as she trotted through the cafeteria, looking for a place to sit. "I wonder how high I'll get promoted when they see how great I am."
There's only one response to that last line.
Oh, wait, she was serious? Allow me to laugh even harder!
As a Corporal of Marines going on 4 years active duty....
BWAHAHAHAAAAAA.....
Oh DT, they're going to eat you ALIVE!
Oh how the mighty will fall
Faved. write more, I'm hooked.
*reads Diamonds assumption about training*
*remembers horror stories from friends about basic training*
This is gonna be good.
Hah! She's got the drive, at least.
...It will not be easy for her at all.
~Skeeter The Lurker
at first..i was a little turned away from this Story..especially with who its about..iv never liked diamond tiara or silver spooon..for obvious reasons but..i figured why not..lets see were the story goes. im interested to say the least Diamond Tiara is in for one hell of a shock when she hits basic training lol
A BIT? She was a bigger troll than Princess Celestia. And possibly Discord!
You dear, earned a follow from me. I love, Diamond Tiara and that pic, since I roleplay as her. I'll be sure to read this for sure.
Even though it's probably common, is that a reference to The Guardian of the Night?
I'm just... This novel doesn't have the Comedy tag, otherwise I'd swear it just went Irresponsible Captain Tylor on me
Ahahaha oh my god, this is the exact thought process of a lot of trainees. Well done.
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Really? Mine's "I wonder how fast they'll kick me out once they see how terrible I am." ...I really need more self confidence.
I'm actually rooting for Di now. Huh. I like her spunk, and I'm genuinely hopeful she's found what she wanted. I'm looking forward to this and how it will tur out, especially what her dad has to say about this spontaneous whim of hers.
On to the next chapter.
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I'm going to become the Captain of the Guard, dattebayo!
I really want to see DT rise to the task. This is well-written, and the third chapter is making me look forward to the entire story. If you can keep a good character arc, I'll be hooked like deep sea bass.
Diamond Tiara joining the EUP Guard Ground Forces? She's in for an enormous shock in terms of life-style and how ponies treat her. On the other hoof, if she makes it through Basic, a whole new world is opening up before her!
That last line of this chapter is perfect! I'm definitely gonna give this one a read.
5048163 You're picture fits with you're comment :P
Well, you grabbed my attention and have thus far managed to maintain a good hold on it. Have a fave and like.
Heh. That's cute, I do like stories that show DT are more than just a bully when she grows up, but as an actual pony, not a mere caricature.
Indeed.
Same.
That last line made me lose it.