4968980 Technically I didn't have to, and I probably could help myself easily if I wanted . Except that this is marked as mature with a sex warning, so I am permitted to . Plus, it was a good way to play around with the newly introduced characters and give some sense of their personalities. Not to mention it was fun to write a scene where the characters were not entirely serious about having sex
She most of her mind wander, having a small part of it keeping track of time.
I think need to fix this one it, I think it should be more alone the line of 'She let most of her mind wander,' you should really do a quick once over before hitting submit. Really like the story, the idea that Tiara need to atone for how she was as a filly is a nice concept.
No wonder Diamond was irate. Bastards fuck and moan in the same room when she's trying to sleep AND DON'T EVEN INVITE HER TO A THREESOME! That's what happens when you bully others.
I giggled at the worst hospital visit ever part. I'm amazed it didn't bust her throat up with all that inflamed headiness. xD
Really nice intermission chapter. Those two are gonna drive Diamond bonkers. :P
4969208 I WAS kinda, sorta, joking. What do ya take me for... some sort of puritan?! And a pox on those who downgraded my comment who didn't understand the humour.
Anyway, no hard (Pun not intended) feelings. Keep writing the story how YOU want to. DAMN THE NAYSAYERS!! Unless of course, it concludes with DT in her four poster bed, with all the events being just a dream. Then I would have get on my high horse (Seriously, where do all these bad jokes keep coming from?!!)
4970632 I know right? Inconsiderate bastards. If they wanted some serious team building get some intimate feelings in the mix makes you want to try even harder not to fuck up so that your lover doesn't die... at least that's how it works out in fiction... in real life... there's a reason they tell you not to get too involved with the other jarheads.
"Aww," she cooed with a grin. "Is Rumble afraid that his little captain will release the troops early?"
Troll.
...a very irate and annoyed looking Diamond Tiara.
I can understand her irritation, they're screwing right in front of her, and don't even invite her to a threesome! How inconsiderate!
"Uh..." Dinky reared up (feeling the softening shaft move inside her) and waved her hooves. "Ooooh. You're dreaming Diamond Tiara. Go back to sleep. Oooh." If the annoyed sigh and rubbing of her head was any indication, Diamond Tiara was not buying.
Who would buy it?
"How should I know?" Dinky retorted. "It's your dream, you pervert." "You two are the perverts!" Diamond Tiara snapped, glaring at the pair. Closing her eyes, she took a deep breath and slowly let it out.
Dinky is best troll.
"I am going to get some air," she told them as she got up and out of bed. "When I come back, I want you both back in your own cots. And for the love of Celestia, don't ever do that again while I'm in here." With that, she headed for the door and left. Dinky and Rumble looked at the door a moment before turning to face each other. The two then started laughing together at the situation.
They're gonna do it again in front of her for shits and giggles, aren't they?
Did Dinky end up in the hospital for a blowjob? And she just had vaginal sex with him? Either she has a very small mouth or she has a very elastic vagina (or she has no experience in a blowjob)
"First of all," she said, "if I'm dreaming, why would I need to go back to sleep? And second, even if I were dreaming, why in the name of Luna would I dream about" -- she motioned at the pair -- " that? "
Bah roommates.
You just had to put in another sex chapter, didn't you? Just couldn't help yourself...
4968980 Technically I didn't have to, and I probably could help myself easily if I wanted . Except that this is marked as mature with a sex warning, so I am permitted to . Plus, it was a good way to play around with the newly introduced characters and give some sense of their personalities. Not to mention it was fun to write a scene where the characters were not entirely serious about having sex
I think need to fix this one it, I think it should be more alone the line of 'She let most of her mind wander,' you should really do a quick once over before hitting submit. Really like the story, the idea that Tiara need to atone for how she was as a filly is a nice concept.
Why do I think that the next time these two are in the mood, they'll just slide Diamond Tiara and her cot out the door and then proceed.
4969513 Hmmm... *
Stealsborrowsconsiders this idea for later use.*4969922
No wonder Diamond was irate. Bastards fuck and moan in the same room when she's trying to sleep AND DON'T EVEN INVITE HER TO A THREESOME!
That's what happens when you bully others.
I giggled at the worst hospital visit ever part. I'm amazed it didn't bust her throat up with all that inflamed headiness. xD
Really nice intermission chapter. Those two are gonna drive Diamond bonkers. :P
I would have listened and when they were just about to cum, I would say "I was awake the whole time"
Throughout this, I kept wondering if Fiery Joker has any stories relating to what happened.
Still, PT is going to be a bitch now if they're exhausted. Might be worth it...
4969208 I WAS kinda, sorta, joking. What do ya take me for... some sort of puritan?! And a pox on those who downgraded my comment who didn't understand the humour.
Anyway, no hard (Pun not intended) feelings. Keep writing the story how YOU want to. DAMN THE NAYSAYERS!! Unless of course, it concludes with DT in her four poster bed, with all the events being just a dream. Then I would have get on my high horse (Seriously, where do all these bad jokes keep coming from?!!)
I AM HERE TO TAKE YOUR PHOTO
4970632 I know right? Inconsiderate bastards. If they wanted some serious team building get some intimate feelings in the mix makes you want to try even harder not to fuck up so that your lover doesn't die... at least that's how it works out in fiction... in real life... there's a reason they tell you not to get too involved with the other jarheads.
If Aura, Rumble, and Dinky were voiced, what would they sound like?
Meh.
4970765
I love you.
Troll.
I can understand her irritation, they're screwing right in front of her, and don't even invite her to a threesome! How inconsiderate!
Who would buy it?
Dinky is best troll.
They're gonna do it again in front of her for shits and giggles, aren't they?
Okay, that ending was pretty funny!
OMG THE ENDING THE ENDING!!!!!!! And Dinky the way you try to save ur selves really?!
Did Dinky end up in the hospital for a blowjob? And she just had vaginal sex with him? Either she has a very small mouth or she has a very elastic vagina (or she has no experience in a blowjob)
Anyway, good story i'm liking more every page
7834850 A Stallion's penis can flare which swells up the head to tie it inside. Like a dog's knot but at the tip instead of the base.
... The face you make when someone is moaning your mother's name...
Mum and I have seen weirder dreams before...