Decent fic all in all ... the clop was a bit on the light side, out of the blue, and was a let down in that it'll probably never happen again. But all in all it's been rather decent.
"I suppose I could use a new style," she said. "Maybe.. half it's current length? Something that can be kind of bouncy like-"
Ugh, that is such a ridiculous cliche. Whenever I see this in stories, I always assume the barber is taking a sadistic satisfaction in crushing the vanity of their victim.
Nice chapter. DT doesn't realize just how many of her expectations are going to be crushed.
I'm thinking that Diamond really didn't know what she was getting into here. It might have been of value to her if she'd talked to Lt Sentry or one of the rest of Twilight's guard first. I'm sure her father's name would have made it possible to get such an interview.
5025034 pretty sure her induction to the armed forced would be the same the shave is the first step to putting recruits on the same lv no matter there social standing before joining up
"Oh, yeah?" Diamond Tiara growled, pushing forward to butt heads with angry mare that was threatening her. "And what are you going to do about it.. Oral?"
Uh oh...
Nopony tells Diamond Tiara what she can and can't do.
You're in the ARMY. Being told what you can and can't do is pretty much in your superiors' job description.
Diamond Tiara let out a sigh of frustration and relief as she left the exam room. She had not enjoyed that. Being weighed and measured was not so bad (although it turned out she had a little extra fat). Having things stuck in her ears, eyes, nose, throat, vagina, and butt while being asked personal questions ( "Are you sexually active?" "How many partners have you been with this year?" "Do you know their medical history?" ) had been awkward and embarrassing. Then there was having blood drawn and a round of vaccinations. That part was painful, but at least it was over quickly.
Next came a stop by supply where she was given a single blanket, a pillow, and a shirt with cadet written across the front and back. Immediately after was the barracks, where Diamond Tiara was shown a cot for her to sleep in, and a foot locker for her personal affects (if she had any).
it's weird, I personally have no desire to be in the military, but I'm a huge fan of Military Fiction,
Tacos
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(Pst... Tacos is code for Lesbian pony sex)
This story needs more recognition.
-Missy
Oh dear... well then, be prepared for the drill instructors telling you what you can or can't do for at least a few weeks
...uhhh... did you forget where you were for a second there, Di?
So... Aura's logic here is: "she bullied me as a filly in elementary school, so I'll bully her az an adult so she quits the guard"
Flawless logic.
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Decent fic all in all ... the clop was a bit on the light side, out of the blue, and was a let down in that it'll probably never happen again. But all in all it's been rather decent.
Ugh, that is such a ridiculous cliche. Whenever I see this in stories, I always assume the barber is taking a sadistic satisfaction in crushing the vanity of their victim.
Nice chapter. DT doesn't realize just how many of her expectations are going to be crushed.
Please make it a lot.
I'm thinking that Diamond really didn't know what she was getting into here. It might have been of value to her if she'd talked to Lt Sentry or one of the rest of Twilight's guard first. I'm sure her father's name would have made it possible to get such an interview.
5025034 pretty sure her induction to the armed forced would be the same the shave is the first step to putting recruits on the same lv no matter there social standing before joining up
Uh oh...
You're in the ARMY. Being told what you can and can't do is pretty much in your superiors' job description.
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That, or she doesn't comprehend what being in the guard entails. Either way, this will be fun.
Sorry I skipped last chapter...
it's weird, I personally have no desire to be in the military, but I'm a huge fan of Military Fiction,