• Member Since 6th Apr, 2012
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Kilojoules


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554732

Lol, really Spirit? :rainbowkiss:

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also you need to make more chapters
this was really good>>554907

555221
You don't know how hard I 'squeed' when you said that. Thank you SO much! :)

(Now that you meantion it, I just might!)

555247Yesyesyesyeyseysyesyesyesyeysyesyes:twilightblush:
i cant wait
love how you put so much detail into it with out puint to much in cant wait tio see how it turns out
ill be wathcing

555263
Lol, thanks, I thought I was going overboard with the details. I'll make sure that the next chapter will be just as good, if not, then better!

(Will start on it as soon as possible!)

555263
Oh, and I'd like to know, should I have clop in every chapter or maybe like, every other? :applejackunsure:

555353wellthats a tough choice but id asy every other chapter cause sex is just an accent to the story
too much of it and it is no longer a good story just shameless cloping
and most people like a good story

555372
Thank you once more! Du-ally noted!
I'll try and get an actual plot into the story, wish me luck. :pinkiehappy:

555391yay :yay:
fare weather and following seas my dear sir

About halfway through the third paragraph, I said to myself

"If i see the word "Partner" one more time I'm not reading this."

556359
P.S.

Did you stop reading?

Male on male.
Fucking messed up, these are ponies for christ sake female on male are good but MoM is just fucked up:rainbowhuh::flutterrage::flutterrage:

556744

That's okay, it's your opinion, but I don't regret a single typo or grammatical error. :heart:

Im must give a dislike for this atrocity, gayness is a burden that must be abolished.:trixieshiftright:

You arent gay right? :rainbowhuh:

556756
Bisexual, thank you, and it saddens me that you would dislike due to its sexual orientation. :pinkiesad2:

But! Once more, your opinion, your right, etc. I respect that.

try righting a gorewarfuck fic, you will do very well:twilightsmile:

556759
Um....thank you...I think?

556760 trust me very few people can write the word actually correctly on this site lol yeah go for it you will become famous and shit

also 6 people think the same, they hate fags don't blame me,

I will now like your story and have a funny gifawesomegifs.com/wp-content/uploads/dancing-pug.gif

556774
Thanks for the .GIF that I somehow cannot view. :rainbowhuh:

And...you want me to write a "Gorewarfuck" fic? As in, like, Gore, and war, and straight sex? I might try, but, I'm not very good with Mare x Stallion sex....
And you'd really think I'd be famous?

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556783 Well, what i mean is
If you write a gore fic= you become famous
If you write a fuck fic= you become famous
If you write a war fic= you become famous

I am sure you will, just don't quit, you know Lord Sugar? He lived in the slums and ghettos but now he is appointed by the queen herself.

You won't get that if you are American, it's a British thing:pinkiesad2:

556813
Er, thanks again. I appreciate your understanding.

I wish I were in Britain. :applejackunsure:

556817 Yea, Great Britain is a nice place to live!:eeyup:

556817this is going good
also he should see fluttershy and have her check out that wrist

also
i sence butthurt in this mans future

i like this story, i really wanna ready more of it.:moustache:

560716
....I hate my life. T)T

Clicking the "save" button while adding to the story. It didn't save as I clicked the Notifications button afterward. Was almost done with the next chapter, be patient.

:facehoof:

this was great
cant wait for more

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562565

Hee-hee:heart:

Thank you all, means so much. :pinkiesmile:

And believe me, next chapter will be along soon.
If school doesn't get in the way. :rainbowderp:

563367no need for thanks just keep writing:scootangel:

good job, this chapter was great, can wait to read more. :moustache:

564530
Thank you, I'm glad you all look so forward to reading the next part. It should be along soon.

:rainbowkiss:

Big Macintosh X Human anal? Urgh. :pinkiesick: It's like taking a 2x4 up the ass.

I'm fine with MxM that has no anal. Still, keep writing.

575022
LOL thank you, haha.
As my ex would say "12 inches of Pleasurable Death"!

took you long enough to update damn it
but still YAY

yah :pinkiehappy:
happy apple day:scootangel:
also updated faster:flutterrage:

1172894

I'm sorry. :fluttercry:

I'll try my best, but I can't promise anything for the next chapter since I'm running out of ideals.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: lollollol great addition.

inspiration cancome from anywhere. dont give up just because you cant think of anything right now :3

1371805

Yes, you are right, and I'll do my best. I've got a few ideas swimming around my head, but for now they're just micro-organisms still evolving within the primordial gunk.

1382574 lol every good idea has its roots :p

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