Land of the Fogotten, Cry of the Moon Princess

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Land of the Fogotten, Cry of the Moon Princess

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Norty Ahri

Norty Ahri #6 · Jul 14th, 2014 · · · 1 The End, or the Beginning? ·

Sorry, but just the description puts me off.

I'm not sure how this got accepted. I'm sure descriptions like such are against some rules.

Draco1364

Draco1364 #7 · Jul 14th, 2014 · · · 1 The End, or the Beginning? ·

To Norty Echo, if you look, I did change the rating from teen to mature, however, I appologize that it puts you off, I just tried to make it a breif summary of what I was going to write about, which, if you think about it, is what a description or synopsis is. I will on the other hand, keep your comment in mind for any other future stories I make. To the rest of the people who decided to wander over to my story because of the description, or any other reason for that matter, please do note, this IS my first story, and any criticism you offer, please let it be constructive so I know what to fix, don't just say, "Wow, this is shitty", say, "Wow this is shitty because..." This way I can provide stories that more people enjoy. Thank you for all of your comments.

Blackguard

Blackguard #8 · Jul 15th, 2014 · · · 2 Counter Attack ·

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How about you rework that description and use it, oh I don't know, to actually tell us about the story. Provide a summary of what we are to expect. Give us a teaser that makes us want to at least read it instead of something vague like you have there.

And nobody cares about your OP, your screen name or your friend.

Draco1364