As Fluttershy is Flying Luna crashes into her and they run into Twilight, Rainbow, Spike and my own character. With Celestia gone and Cadeence out of commision, what will they do to stop the mysterious monster?
To Norty Echo, if you look, I did change the rating from teen to mature, however, I appologize that it puts you off, I just tried to make it a breif summary of what I was going to write about, which, if you think about it, is what a description or synopsis is. I will on the other hand, keep your comment in mind for any other future stories I make. To the rest of the people who decided to wander over to my story because of the description, or any other reason for that matter, please do note, this IS my first story, and any criticism you offer, please let it be constructive so I know what to fix, don't just say, "Wow, this is shitty", say, "Wow this is shitty because..." This way I can provide stories that more people enjoy. Thank you for all of your comments.
Sorry, but just the description puts me off.
I'm not sure how this got accepted. I'm sure descriptions like such are against some rules.
To Norty Echo, if you look, I did change the rating from teen to mature, however, I appologize that it puts you off, I just tried to make it a breif summary of what I was going to write about, which, if you think about it, is what a description or synopsis is. I will on the other hand, keep your comment in mind for any other future stories I make. To the rest of the people who decided to wander over to my story because of the description, or any other reason for that matter, please do note, this IS my first story, and any criticism you offer, please let it be constructive so I know what to fix, don't just say, "Wow, this is shitty", say, "Wow this is shitty because..." This way I can provide stories that more people enjoy. Thank you for all of your comments.