As Fluttershy is Flying Luna crashes into her and they run into Twilight, Rainbow, Spike and my own character. With Celestia gone and Cadeence out of commision, what will they do to stop the mysterious monster?
4692464 How about you rework that description and use it, oh I don't know, to actually tell us about the story. Provide a summary of what we are to expect. Give us a teaser that makes us want to at least read it instead of something vague like you have there.
And nobody cares about your OP, your screen name or your friend.
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How about you rework that description and use it, oh I don't know, to actually tell us about the story. Provide a summary of what we are to expect. Give us a teaser that makes us want to at least read it instead of something vague like you have there.
And nobody cares about your OP, your screen name or your friend.
4695308 Is this a little better? Thank you for your input and how I can make it better.![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)