Don't think you're gonna get nice reception with suicide. If it was other outside forces slaying her then maybe.

4647060 I know it's a terrible idea, but I wrote it anyway. The whole point is it's in response to another story where Twilight kills herself. I decided since I had this bad idea anyway I might as well just go all out and stop worrying about how distasteful it is because it's going to be rotten regardless.

This story is really good, but it is in desperate need of an editor.

4687557 Yea, I don't have any of those certainly. I do the best I can myself, but I guess it's just not enough. *sigh* I guess I need to do something about that.

4687640 Like let me edit it when I have the time?

4689090 I'd love that. At least assuming you are making the offer and I'm not terribly confused.

I…actually like this. Although, this feels more like it should be teen rather than mature; if you had described every death and gruesome thing in detail, then it would be mature. But as is, no.

When does Twilight start being badass?

4697647 Yea, i went back and forth on the rating but decided to go on the safe side and choose mature.

4699165 This seems like an odd question to me. That's certainly not the point of this story. Though completely unrelated to this story is http://www.fimfiction.net/story/197766/sparkling-field-research-rote-episode-10. She's pretty badass in that.

This is the best story I've had in a long time
Thank You

up vote and fav

4859284 Thank you very much.

I liked Rainbow. She felt pretty close to original flavor. And it was oddly heartwarming. With a good deal of fridge horror.

The whole demonic possession bit was kinda weak. At a guess you came up with it after realizing that Twilight wouldn't normally kill herself just like that? Better than that would have been, and it didn't detract too much from the story.

5079817 To some degree the whole point of this story is I find the idea of Twilight wanting to kill herself ridiculous. It's a little silly but I wanted something fast and easy to explain since fighting some evil is in no way the point of the story. I also wanted some reason to distance Twilight from her friends so they might think it's real. Also finding it in a book just makes sense, no?

Upon reading the description I am disgusted yet... intrigued. Let's see how this goes then.

This story is morbid, hilarious and heartwarming all in one, fave and thumbs, cuz it has been a while since i read something equally entertaining.

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Morbidly hilarious? Hilariously morbid?

...this makes me want to play an Eclipse Phase game now. The RPG where you can never die.

well i have to say this story made my stomach turn and mad me laugh... it's a first i'll tell you that. Haven't experienced a good Dark Comedy in a while. faved and upvote.

Awesome Dark Comedy.

Finaly!
I couldn't find this fic and i've been searching forever.
Funnily enough: searching by title didn't find it, i had to google search for 'complex death machine' chapter.