This story seems interesting and I enjoy the protagonist's personality. His interaction with Filthy was great and I found Diamond's crush on him humorous, particularly because it seems to creep the hitman out. I'll give it a favorite and a like. Hope to see more of this story.

This story is very interesting and I vant wait to see what happens next.

Other than swapping too (usually associated more with actions) and to occasionally, and an extra space in one of the very first sentences, I can't really see much else to grammar Nazi.

It only took me forty-five minutes to either assemble or dissemble my sniper rifle and pack it into such a small space.

...Either high-caliber rifles are a heck of a lot more fiddly or you've never actually disassembled a rifle. Put an M4 in front of me and I'll have it stripped down in 10, back together in another 10, and thirty rounds downrange by the twelfth minute mark. And that's with a rifle I've only used a couple times. If he's as familiar with the rifle as several years' experience would imply, he'll have it stripped or reassembled in under 5.

This could be hilarious if the hit-man starts working directly with Equestria from the get go. It probably won't happen with the hit-man being captured then forced into involvement. Though, you probably want the hitman to be a good guy which by profession is immoral in society and shunned upon in almost any society. Though snipers in the army could be designated by authority and have many regulation in place that would keep in control while hit-man are born from their first kill. What I hope for this story is the hit-man while contemplative and desensitized will not end up happy in the end. Hope to se more of this story.

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Oh, dang. I didn't mean to put forty-five! Thanks for pointing that out!
(That's what I get for writing at 4:00 in the morning. )

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He's not a good guy, but he has morals. He's neutral, yet evil. He doesn't care what he's doing as long as he gets the right amount of cash. I mean, he's taking the country's only means of defense and giving it to a dangerous criminal, how worse can ya get?

6057716 The reason I only had such a slight understanding of hit men is me recently taking a sociological course in the college I am in. People usually don't become hit men of their own volition. What is he suppose to do will make him the number one enemy in equestria and this will lead to quite a little adventure.

Holy shit, a regular Agent 47 here... I'll like n fave and watch this story evolve...

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I knew someone was gonna say it. The Hitman games were a big inspiration on the story.

A Hitman, eh? I like it.

You miiight wanna check out the grammar there~

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Wut B rong? eye bast et spullin.

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absolution 47? The one where he did the right thing?

Luv it XD

6059742 Yep

You have my attention

Hitman much?
You have captured my interest good sir! Nicely written.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Holy Shit. Dis gona be good!

Very good. Write more please.

I've seen stories with worse grammar, so long as it's just a few mistakes here and there; I'm fine. Please post more chapters, I want to see where this goes.

6306553 I usually have better grammar, but I kinda wrote this at like four in the morning.

Will this story be updated any time soon? I'm itching for more It's Just Business!

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Sorry, I've been working on another story that is kinda set in the "It's Just Business..." World. It's called "Crime Pays" and it's about bank robbers, 'nuff said. Anyways, after I post that I should update some of my older stories soon. It's just difficult to write about a serious hitman when your mind is full of fuck.

6381434 True, anyways, i jusr wanted to see if the story was dead, Thanks

Ok, I'm gonna say it. I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!

Continue this pls. :)

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K, I'll find some time to write in between the time I spend abusing my children and snorting coke.

...hehehehehahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MORE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!