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Vladimir


I love stories, arts, and honestly, Crossovers, Like Bleach, or Naruto -very VERY little Naruto though...- Harry Potter -LOVE IT!- and more!

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Two things, just from reading the summary.

It's "Tite" Kubo. With an "I". And it's Hogyoku, with a "G".

If you can make such minor mistakes when the correct information is literally an address away if you aren't sure about it, it typically bodes ill for the story itself.

Sorry, I had forgotten how to spell the names and at the time my computer was acting up. I'll be sure to fix those problems. And really? I got Tite right the first time!? Why did I second guess myself.... Thank you for telling me of those problems, they shall be rectified. :twilightsmile:

Not something I would usually read but you turned Spike into one of the most badass characters in Bleach so you have my vote.

Awesome story so far is one of the best bleach cross overs I have read

While I'm liking this mind giving Spike the top seat every once in a while?

4775553 Er...really?
4775563 Sure, I mean he does have to have his moments, am I right? :rainbowwild:

4775655 Yeah but I don't think I've seen one yet. Everyone has there sub and dom moments but so far I've only seen sub from Spike. It feels a bit off since he could easily kill all three if he wants to.

4775970 True, but don't worry, he's going to have his moment next chapter, i'm actually right in the middle of making it right now, along with a certain blue unicorn who isn't such a snob. Hint hint!

I still don't under stand the number ranking It was easy when I watched the show but most of this is going over my head can you please tell me what dark they are in digits please.

Also great chapter I have to say this is one of my fav storys I like your way you mad the some of the people from the show in to some of the charters from bleach it is 1 of the things. I love to see in stories this is my top 20 fav stories of all time maybe even top 10 for what you did.

2 chapters in 1 day cool hope the next one is soon as well:twilightsmile:

4777213 In rank there are a total of "10" but there are also Pseudo or "Numero".
4777227 I'm glad^^
4777454 Thanks, and it should be good too, but I'm not finished with it yet^^''

4780188 I know that it just I can not tell what the words your using means in English as 123

4780257 Oh, Primera is 1(like uno), Segunda is 2, Trecera is 3, so on and so forth. I'm not exactly sure that it's all spanish, and some of it might be Latin, but I could be wrong, as I asked my friend in Mexico what Segunda Etapa meant, and she said "Second Form".

Okay, when Resurreccion, Segunda Etapa comes out you know you're more or less screwed.:moustache::pinkiecrazy::rainbowdetermined2:

4782434 Yup! But there's something bigger than that!! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

well that happened NEXT!

So wait spike is part dragon,hallow,changeling, and vampire I think I got them all. But just wow never thought that much change would happen to him but I still like the story I only hope that spike dose not become to op.
But still this is one of my favs so I can deal with it

4820959 OP? Hell no! For the original version of this chapter, Chrysalis was beating him into the ground and was bored doing so. Hell, I can't even make her into a Hollow because she can do whatever she pleases! But yeah, anyone that is OP it would be these people/ponies, things:
1. Eris(Instead of Discord
2. Chrysalis
3. Nightmare Moon
4. Luna
5. Celestia
6. Spike
7. Dash
8. Twilight
9. Gilda
10. Hogyo-ku

4821029 I can see your point but but from my eye he can seam at time a little op not out world is op like discord but more In a sence of at most times he can be a wath the word for it is at the top of my head. O under challenged but for the most part I see anything that has more then 4 type of creatcher in it op in some way but I have an op scale and I do agree he is not the most op character I have seen but I still think he is a little op. It is just my opinion and if I have in anyway,shape or from ofened you I am sorry i am just trying to help you make shure he dose not become a "red and black alicorn" if you would I want to see this story thrive because it is one of my fav on fimfiction defenly in the top ten cross-overs with mlp.

Singed the Pandomic Thunder
Dusk P. Volt

4821133 I see your point. And yes, he is an "OP character", but if he were to fight against a full powered Nightmare, he is severely outclassed, even Cadence could beat him into the ground. Ichigo can most certainly beat him into the ground if he were transformed. But, yes, Spike is an OP character mainly because 1. I love Spike, he's my favorite character in the show second to Discord for males. 2. He's Ulquiorra-freaking-Cifer reincarnated! How can you NOT be OP? 3. I do NOT plan on making him a black and white Alicorn! That would be just plain wrong! He WILL however go through a series of changes that fit his Dragon heritage and nature, not to mention what he, Dash, Gilda, Orihime and Ichigo all have inside them which gives them a power boost. And I am in no way shape or form affended! What would give you, or anyone, that idea?

Signed, Vladimir

So Chrysalis has Cerberus and Spike can transform in to Alucard. Niccccce!

4653681
Do you still have the old version of Equestria's Espada?

Dash kissing Spike.

So....you just made Grimmjow...kiss Ulquiorra.......

5240318 It is unfortunate that I do not, and I am also sorry to say that this story might end up going to loopy/chaosville soon. Well...shit.
5240390 Does that really blow your mind? Interesting.

when will we get an update on the story

KO pretty cool hope to see some action and more awesomeness.:pinkiehappy:

5679527 KO please say that the next chapter is coming soon for more awesomeness of this story. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

5679527 KO please say the next chapter is coming soon PLEASE. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::rainbowdetermined2:

Eh... bad execution. The entire time the tone just felt... off. And I couldn't really get into the story. I liked the thought of the story, but the application of somehow fusing RD/Grimmjow and Spike/Ulquiorra just left a sour taste in my mouth. Especially when RD actually blushed at Spike, knowing she'd only known him for about less than a day and there was no way Grimmjow was blushing over Ulquiorra.

All in all, pretty bad. Was hoping for a good story, but I'm now walking away disappointed.

So they are multiple characters in one now

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