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Kinda creepy but a lot of the dialogue was pretty off.
Overall decent with a few issues in areas like writing style and some of the characters reacting a little strangely in the given circumstances.
Wow.
That's pretty good.
I might fully review it once I am rested.
At first I was like:
the rest of the fic.
Then:
Then
Moral of the story: Never get sick.
Nice story! Who are you going against though? Honestly, he doesn't stand a chance, unless he's some fabled writer xD
Damn... this was legitimately scary... I love this!
I usually never like pure "dark-stories", but this was fantastic!
-Glassed
Damn, I don't like dark stories but Konseiga gave a link to the story and Glassed gave it a good rating so I guess I'll add it to queue and leave a better comment when I get to it. But now, now for some comedy/random stories.
not at all scary till the end.
not scared because
1. twilight has the ability to teleport, and could have easily escaped.
2. the events with twilight happen in the middle of the day.
3. why is twilight in a carriage that isn't flying? and what happened to whoever was pulling/steering? most transportation to and fro is done by pegasi chariots, which, you know, fly.
4. she continued packing when she knew she was in the presence of a dangerous being.
5. relies more on gore than suspense.
6. not enough build up
431433 Do you realize how weird it is to see someone mention you giving them recommendation... I love you!
-Glassed
Bit off in some places, but it was creepy
Thank you... As Cupcakes has distorted my view of Pinkie Pie, so has this story distorted my view of Twilight... Now I'll always see that image in my head... Congrats man! You've written the next Cupcakes!
Welp, I've been scarred for life.
In all seriousness though, good job...creepy as all get out, but good job.
Not scary at all ( Sorry, I am not easily scared, that's just me)....But, I liked the story though. Happy Birthday bro
Happy birthday! The story was pretty good, but there were a few characterization issues, in my opinion. Twilight would NEVER leave Spike behind.
not to mention several character flaws twilight is very inconsistent with her true personality she would not of contuned to pack also she has a mother/son relationship with spike if it did take spike she would of at least made an effort to fight it not just run off with her til between her legs
I am officially scared for my life. This is the second grimdark story to ever get to me. It's weird how the only ones that get to me are the ones that include Twilight.
Weird.
Great story, though! I mean sure, there were a few character flaws with Twilight, but other than that, it was near flawless.
I give this story a 4 out of 5.
Dare to be Different, Carpe Diem, and Live Life to the Fullest! /)(\
I want sequel
I am having Richtofengasms! ~jizz~ Haaaa ja~
Not necessarily scary, but the writing was okay. Not really enough suspense, and I think it would be creepier if we never found out what happened to the ponies, if all we heard was their screams of desperation and other ponies perhaps found their mutilated bodies. The unknown is just about the scariest thing there is.
This was really scary, in my opinion. I was really more disgusted than anything else by all the gore, and I agree with other people that say that we should never have found out how those ponies died.
Nevertheless, that was really cool and incredibly descriptive in my opinion. Thanks for putting this up! And don't bother with a sequel, the little bit of suspense at the end would be killed by a sequel.
AAAND I CRAPPED MY PANTS!!!!!!!
That was scary.
I would say I have been scared, but nothing seems to scare me. But I can still tell when something is scary to others (weird how that works) and this is scary.
0_0
wierd thing, unintentionally, i only read/ play slender things around 12:30 am. 2 days ago i played slender at 1:00 in the morning for the first time. then yesterday i read a fic on him around 12:40. and now today i read this at 12:50. great story, i really want to know what happened between slendermane and celestia.
I read this while listening to this;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eMgbfFpXZu0
not gonna be able to sleep for four days.
I've seen enough hentai to know where this is going!