• Member Since 27th Oct, 2011
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BlazingShadowBrony


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Rewritten and Revised: Thanks to FauxFox. All my current chapters are revised. I take credit for the idea, characters and general structure of this fanfiction. But credit goes to FauxFox for the editing and making the story a worthwhile read. THANKS FAUXFOX!

When Twilight finds an interesting subject on the Elements of Harmony, six stallions arrive in ponyville seeking homes. Twilight is distracted from the interesting subject and helps the stallions feel welcome.
But when a new evil lurks on the horizon, will the Elements of Harmony be enough?

(Cover image was made in GeneralZoi's Pony Creator Full Version, credit to her for the opportunity to give you all a visual representation of Firewing)

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 20 )

Oh yeah! your story sounds epic so far keep updating:twilightsmile:

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Well I'm glad you like it. The next chapter is heading in soon.

Very interesting story you have going on here. I like the idea of another set of Elements that's linked to a group that isn't just a colt version of the mane 6. Heck I like the idea of another set of Elements just by itself. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Orange dragon-winged colt... not trying to steal the glory or anything, but are you a reader of my fic Shaken? Again, not trying to say you stole anything...

23253 Oh God dammit! How in the hell does this always happen? :flutterrage:
Now to answer your question. No, no I haven't. Although I went to check it out, sounds like an interesting concept. :twilightsmile:
But I digress, this is my only original idea for now and I do believe that my other fic will make me an unoriginal basterd.

I thank you for you comment though. Makes me feel like people like my fic. :pinkiehappy:

grade story i want more

a little twitchy, too fast paced i think for your writing style. i had to read it twice to get everything lol. good concept, but i think a little cleaning up, maybe some more detail, or just slow down the pace a bit would do chapters like this alot of good. something tells me that maybe youre not used to action writing, and i think you may have gotten a bit carried away. but i dont want to critisize you to death! i think it was a good story, it certainly got my attention at the end, tho it was hard to keep. i cant wait to see what comes next!:twilightsmile:

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Ah! Thank you. I realize it is horribly twitchy, but I did it that way so I could get it on to the chapters list. I've had it for too long and I wanted to get to work on the next chapter. :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:
Course, you are right, I'm not completely used to righting action story scenes with ponies yet. But I'm trying. :yay: You liking the end is what I wanted to hear, I'm extremely glad. :pinkiesmile:

Fixes and a large change to Firewing's cutie mark in the future. Thank you for liking.

I am enjoying this a lot. :pinkiehappy: Also, I would be delighted if Windy Day had a *PINKAMENA* moment. :pinkiecrazy: Just sayin'.

Hehehehehe Rainbow and Storm are still asleep.

I have a prize for anyone who can get the video I'm referencing with a certain part with Riverbank and Twilight.
Hint: YouTube and a saxophone. :twilightsmile:

Leading parasprites away with Epic Sax, you say?

Great chapter! ^_^

372370 WE HAVE A WINNER! :yay: Why not, he's like Pinkie to a point, let's give him something human. :ajsmug:
And thank you...It's good to hear that it was a good chapter, what with TF2 getting in my way.

>>BlazingShadowBrony

I understand distraction. I pretty much lost track of everything here on FimFiction between my art and them changing the profile layout and making it MUCH harder for me to see when things updated...^_^

449853 Well thank Celestia that I'm not the only person falling behind...or would that be pony. BAH! Who cares? :trollestia:
I hope you will continue to read and be distracted. :scootangel:

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