Shadows stir in the north, and an ancient darkness awakens. Far away in Ponyville, what starts as a simple, childish act of spite, puts the entire world in danger. On Hearth's Warming Eve Luna and Celestia discover a disturbing turn of events. The darkness is coming, and the only thing that can stop it is the crystal box. Twilight has left it with Rarity however, and unfortunately for everyone, Sweetie Belle has sold it. Now Rarity must race to find the box and the princesses must race to save the world, while Sweetie Belle simply prays she isn't grounded for life.
Chapters (3)
Saw you needed an editor. I can help!
4551032 I always appreciate input.
Holy shit... I came here expecting a funny little fic, but I came out with this... I don't usually give favorites to ended stories, but... You earned it.
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Well I'm really glad you liked it. 
It's nice to hear that people have enjoyed my story, even with the odd style I decided to go with. 
4557684 The style really compliments the tone and the fact that you only use actual dialogs at certain points really finalized the sort of epic like aesthetic you set up. As I've said before, when I first saw this I thought it would be funny based on the summary, but you do an almost complete 180 on expectations and it makes the story so much more than it could have been.
4558136 You... you got it!
I can't believe someone actually understood what I was going for with that! 
I wanted to impart a sense of objective neutrality when dealing with the ponies. To show that these two colossal forces are on such a completely different scale, that the ponies of Equestria are but objects to them. I wanted to show this separation with something significant, yet not to noticeable, so as not to break the flow. In a sense, compared to these beings, the ponies are simply not 'important' enough to have dialogue.
I honestly thought nobody would get it, but I'm really glad someone was able to see what I was trying to do with it.
love it so far