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ChaosDragon


Welcome to my mind. It's a random and often dark (sometimes even dirty) place. Lanterns and bleach have been provided for your convenience and are located on the table in the corner. Enjoy your stay.

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*Listen to the audio recording here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66f13-TxaQM*

War is a terrible thing. Whether you are actually fighting or not, it affects us all. Many never realize what is happening to them, but some do, and Pinkie Pie is one of them. For too long she has watched as the war has slowly drained Equestria's citizens of their hope and joy, and she cannot sit by any longer. It's time for Pinkie to stand up and fight, to save the hearts and hopes of the people before they are gone forever, even if she has to do it alone.

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Who were they fighting?

4850951 It isn't really specified. Just some unknown enemy force that was threatening Equestria. Perhaps a Griffon and Zebra alliance. Like I said in the authors note, this was inspired by a piece of artwork done by FoxInShadow. The physical war wasn't the focus of the story, it was simply a means to help set up the scenario that had sprung into my head.

I don't know if this will help make it any clearer, but here's what was going through my head when I saw the picture. "Why is Twilight wearing armor? Maybe there was some sort of war? But Pinkie appears dead, so maybe she died in or around this war, since Twilight was still in her armor? But I don't think Pinkie would ever willingly take part in a war. Killing, let alone physical violence, just doesn't seem like something she would be a part of. Maybe she was involved in another way?..." And it just kinda went on from there.

I seem to have wandered off topic a bit, but I hope I was able to help you understand it a little better. :twilightsmile:

4854718 Hmmm. Inspiration to a story that I will write. Probably the Changelings were the enemy. But it was a good story, loved it. :)

4852492 You dont say. Sarcasm right there.

4855153 *slaps a copyright sticker on the story* All rights reserved! :rainbowwild:

But seriously though, I may actually expand upon this story once I finish my current project. I mean, I don't mind you taking inspiration from it, but just keep my future plans in mind when you're writing so you don't follow this specific concept too closely. Otherwise, good luck with it. :twilightsmile:

4855201 no no, not like that. This story has inspired me to make a war story. Yes, I promise not to harm the copyright thingy and all that doo daa.:pinkiehappy: and I won't follow the concept to closely. Glory to Britannia. lel

4855273 Ah, well then I'm glad I could inspire you then. :raritywink: No need to worry about copyright or whatever, that was just me joking around. Although a shout out is always appreciated. :twilightsheepish:

If you enjoy war stories, I suggest you keep an eye on my current project "The Legends of Lore". It may not look like it now from the first two chapters, but the final piece is planned as an epic fantasy adventure revolving around a shadow war. Kinda Lord of The Rings-ques, but of my own design and a fair bit of humor. It's kinda hard to describe to be honest. :facehoof: Why do I keep trying.

4855330 yes, yes, a big shout out. MUHAHAHAA! I will turn Equestria into the biggest THEMEPARK EVER!:trixieshiftleft: and there will only be one place where the parents can smoke! :pinkiecrazy: im such an eveil genius! And I will read the other story, haha. Your good at making stories, keep it up bro. :)

4855380 :rainbowderp: *backs away from crazy pony* Oooookaaaaay, well good luck with that.

And thanks for the compliment. :twilightsmile:

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That was magnificent! Could you do a prequel to this story explaining who was fighting in the war, aside from Equestria? :raritydespair:

4923020 Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for your question, I think I addressed it in another comment.

"It isn't really specified. Just some unknown enemy force that was threatening Equestria. Perhaps a Griffon and Zebra alliance. Like I said in the authors note, this was inspired by a piece of artwork done by FoxInShadow. The physical war wasn't the focus of the story, it was simply a means to help set up the scenario that had sprung into my head."

If it helps, just assume it was some sort of Griffon and Zebra alliance, as I was leaning that way. As for actually writing a prequel to this, I'll have to add it to my list. Right now I'm working on my new project "The Legends of Lore", and that story has its own war for me to think about, so it might be a while before I get some free time to put any thought into this prequel idea of yours.

Have no idea what in the name of Lord Cockshitfuck of LSD Magic is going on right now. :rainbowderp:

5839151
Death and tragedy I assume.

5839154 Not exactly. I mean, if Pinkie really is dead, it's cause for celebration.

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I assume you don't like her very much.

5839163 Least favorite character, actually. If I was in a room with Hitler, Osama Bin Laden, and Pinkie and I had a gun with two bullets in it, I'd shoot Pinkie twice.

4854718 Where can I find that artwork?

7045815 If you are referring to the artwork that inspired the story, there is a link to it in the author's notes.

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