• Published 30th May 2014
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A Nature Girl Answers Its Call - TimeBomb0



[Watersports] Fluttershy tries to have a quick potty break in the woods. It doesn't quite work out like that.

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Comments ( 11 )

'Wee'?
I haven't heard it called that in a long time...

You go find some clop, on the FIMFiction! TimeBomb says "this some grade-A clop!" I take it out, I rub it, I stretch it.

Ten outta ten.

I'm going to try to ignore the humanized part of it. Time for my imagination powers to take hold. :rainbowdetermined2:

Been funny if the acorn got stuck btween her legs and she started a war over it.

Luz

Pretty good

Just how old is Fluttershy supposed to be in this story? A lot of the language feels... exceedingly young (like calling her vaginal region her "youthful happy place"). I keep feeling like Chris Hanson is going to come out and ask me to have a seat.

4474986
Fluttershy is 18+ in this story. I wouldn't write it if she wasn't.

4478622 I assumed as much, but the language used is very... young. Most of the descriptors are things you would expect small children to use, which makes it quite an awkward read.

4480048 it is supose to make it sound funny. You know how kids call thier things different things, mainly because thay dont know what it is or used for.

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