After hundreds of years of a devastating, crippling war, the ponies of Equestria find themselves without a princess and in total chaos. The government of Equestria needed a way to keep the ponies at peace, so they create a special robot unit to keep the ponies in check. But the Robots are not quite so peaceful. Murder. Families being torn apart. The government refuses to believe that their Robot Units are really so bad. A revolution is started, but can never get the chance to really show the government what they can really do. But one Robot Unit and one Mare will change all of that.
And a secret threatens to change the ponies' existence forever. (Note: this is an UNEDITED COPY!!!)
Chapters (22)
Feedback please!
This is a pretty good story so far! I can't wait for the ne- wait a minute...
Is that...
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NO.
OooO! I really like this so far! It is really interesting and I just can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Keep up the good work!!
(Side note: there are some words that say 'where' instead of 'were'.)
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Thank you. I will work on that.
Oh, and thanks for the feedback!
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Ha ha! Nice. I never thought of that. Oh, and about the next chapter, I write fast and it could be out very soon.
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No problem!!!
Yay, new chapter!
Looks like things are finally starting up. I can't wait to see what happens next! 
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You have to keep reading to find out...
I have big plans for this story. I plan to have many twists and turns, cliff hangers, and mystery!!
I really do have high hopes for this story!
I truly wonder how this will all play out.
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Here is a picture I drew of Blossom Wing!
Well this is starting to look good!
The concept is interesting and is certainly different from most stories. As for characters and the writing itself, it isn't actually that bad. My advice is that you slow down the pacing by quite a bit, take time to describe what's happening.
Looking forward to new chapters!
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I am still trying to work out the kinks in being a writer!
Thank you. I will try to improve.
And we have a title.
It's me, Pyra and before I forget, MOAR!!! 
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Yeah. This story might take me a while to completely finish, but I think the new chapter will be out soon! Don't worry!
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Nice, this is getting real good~!
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Any predictions?
4491704 The government will find out about this and arrest Broken and Blossom!
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THEN I MUST KEEP WRITING SO THAT YOU MAY FIND OUT OF YOUR PREDICTION WAS CORRECT!
This is starting to get good!
OooOOoooo~ Can't wait for the next chapter >v<!!!
4491808 Do YOU have any predictions? Sorry, I just want to know!
4491766 Yep. And more is on the way! (Who is your favorite character? Sorry, I just tend to ask questions like that! Don't hate me!
*hides behind Broken and Blossom Wing for protection*
)
4491873 Broken is best robot.
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Broken says thank you!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KAKC72RpH-CfDHremdklF6g5JeqdarTbfP65AYor9hw/edit
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Hmmm, I'm not sure. Welp. I guess I predict that Blossom and Broken'll be friends...
and that a great conflict between Tornado and Blossom'll occur and then things might happen that may not be undone?
I think that might happen maybe...
Idk, that's the closest thing of a prediction that you may get outta me, sorry.
Guess I'll have to keep reading to find out though, huh?
(I also predict that Blossom and Broken might overtake the government but that's prolly jus' me.
)
Something tells me that Little Leaf might be sorta understanding about the situation. Maybe...Hopefully...
Well, there are still a few punctuation errors strewn about like missing a quotation mark, but that isn't really a deal breaker. I believe you're slowing things down a bit, I think, which is nice to see. All in all this story is really getting on well!
Keep it up my friend
4497416 Thank you! Yeah, stupid quotation mark...
I guess I have to let my editor read my stories. (She's my mom)
4497659 That's honestly quite nice of her
Hmm... I'm thinking that I should change the cover to something different. What do you guys think?
4506304 nah bra, is cool
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JgpR3c0rGUq6KvgkjFF0aUvu6ivn8n5IA5m3EtUpV-w/edit (Copy this and put it into the search bar to see what I would have changed it to. :))
Okay then!
4507664 oooooh you little so and so
I do say that the new one is better... alright then, I vote for change. Also I hope it's alright if I link the image to this comment so others can see
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That's fine.
So! New cover or not? Vote yes or no!
Well this has escalated quickly. Poor Blossom...
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Aww man, poor Blossom...
Yet still a very interesting development so far. Voice changes...hmmmmmmm...
Guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter then!
Well... shit...
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What do you mean?
4515745 You're really getting better at writing this story, the newest chapter was unexpected, I'd thought that Blossom and Tornado would be the best of friends again, but nope
That's what I mean
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Well snap son, Broken is a bad arse
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