I often have the strange desire to balance random objects on my head.
With an obscure evil on the horizon, the princesses must act fast. Twilight obviously thinks she's the best choice, but Celestia chooses to send Discord instead! Twilight must prove her worth, so she turns her attention to the chest from the Tree of Harmony.
In order to open it, she needs six keys. All of her friends have found mysterious, shiny objects, but she has yet to find one of her own. Thus begins her quest.
This might also need a Comedy tag.
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Edit: sorry. Now I noticed that this was a oneshot. It could be better if you developed it more.
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I'm not sure what you said before, and I'm sort of curious...
But sorry about that. I just sorta pounded this out in like half an hour to warm up for writing another story. It was just a silly idea that I had.
I'll try to come back to this, though.
4343954 I said. "This sounds interesting. Can't wait for more."
Then I saw that this was just an oneshot and it made me frown a bit and remove the fav because of wasted potential.
I'll refav in the hope you'll continue this.
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I'll try, but it'll be a while, probably. I have a couple other stories I'm in the middle of, and I'm also currently in the middle of exams, so it'll be a month or two before I can make my way back here. Sorry.
4344267 i'll wait for you.
I saw it coming that Spike is the key when he came back with the snacks.
I noticed that you wrote it in a way like everypony knows that it's a star of a TV show. And you parodied the concerns that Spike is only used for comic relief.
It's a great parody, I have rarely read a fanfiction that is so random.
I honestly can't understand why it gets so much downvoted.
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I think it's gotten so many downvotes because it's a very subtle form of satire, where it seems like I'm legitimately hating on Spike. I'm not, but most of the people that downvoted probably thought I was.
I'm glad you liked it, though!
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I thought that this is the reason.
Well, at least now it's even.