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I loved reading this... And I do think I've seen a few of those names some where in the books... But not for that chapter, but none the less, good job!
Hmm. Interesting. And the ponies are anthro right?
No, although it would make the story a little easier... in some aspects, for now the ponies are just regular ponies.
4325945 so, just to clear things up for the rest of us... Just the four guys in dark angle tech are anthro... Right? Or are they just pony-esk in their appearances?
Either way it will prove interesting to see anthro ponies interact with regular ones... Don't ya think?
4333393 It's anthro ponies interacting with regular ones, the dark angels are anthro
4333969 Kk, awesome, thanks for clearing that up :D
4340522 You're welcome, and the funniest part... BACON! cuz my friends and I LOVE bacon.
4340589
Please keep writing, I have fallen in love with this story........
4417279 I fell behind a bit last week, so hopefully this week I can get past my little block so I can get two out to keep up with the schedule that I impressed upon myself
I fucking love this story! Thank you so much bro!
this just makes me so frwakin elated to read this story. Thank you so much man!
WWOOHOOO!WOOHOOOOOOOOOO
4426044 Happy to oblige
Awesome chapters man! Great jobs on both!
Can't wait for the next ones! HAIL THE EMPRESSES!
4441942 Oh good... I knew I was just being harsh on myself, saying that the whole thing was probably just inevitably a waste of time...
I really need to be more appreciative of myself...
maybe that's why I get writer's block...
4442270 Maybe, and i like how you added in the new characters, its very similar to how some authors have done so in the actual books, so props for that mate!
4444132 The hilarious thing is that I've only read the book about the siege of Armageddon that features the black templars.
4444859 lol!
Well if ou need any pointers just ask, I've read a score or so of the war hammer 40k books and can recal quite a bit of info if you need it.
4445770 Any suggestions at all help with the overall introduction of characters, I've just got to get more chapters rolling.
well what ya know, a blueballs that's actually worth having around and not dropped in a mud puddle
my reaction to the end with the changeling burning was "WE DON'T NEED NO FIRE LET THE MOTHERFUCKERS BURN" i actually said that when i read that the changelings where burning
I like this Blueblood, why aren't there more like him.
4461826 Because everyone extrapolates the behavior seen in one episode of the show.
FOR THE EMPRESSES!
LET THE BLOOD OF HERETICS FLOW IN THEIR NAME! GLORY TO LUNA, GLORY TO CELESTIA!
WE WILL UNLEASH THE FURY OF A THOUSAND SUNS UPON THEIR ENEMIES!
WE WILL BREAK THEIR BONES AND SHATTER THEIR SKULLS AND CRUSH THEIR BODIES!
WE SHALL COME FOR THEM, AND THEY SHALL KNOW TRUE FEAR!
THEY WILL DIE AT OUR HAND, BY OUR GUN, AND BY OUR BLADE!
WE LIVE TO SERVE! WE LIVE TO PROTECT! WE KILL FOR HONOR! WE FIGHT FOR THE EMPRESSES!
DOWN WITH THE HERETIC!
DOWN WITH THE TRAITOR!
DOWN WITH CHAOS!
FOR THE EMPRESSES!
WE WILL BURN OUR ENEMIES AND DESTROY THEM!
TO ARMS MY BROTHERS!
4483597 I love it when I get comments... it makes me feel speshul...
wasn't this story supposed to be updated today
4495876 Yes, sometime today, I only got up like half an hour ago, I still gotta get awake, lol
4495954 sorry, it's these damn time zones
4495965 No problem, although I do try to keep it updated every wednesday, sometimes it might be a little later, or we could get a two for one week if I experience a little writer's block.
4495980 i guess that's true and such
4496002 And YAY! The story was updated while we were talking!
4496009 AWESOME!!
TICONDRIUS!!!! when ever he is the one talking i actually read it out loud
Finally marines who specialize in close combat !
Isnt Alhardir a assault marine?
4497337 Sort of, assault marines technically specialize in battlefield mobility and have light weaponry so they can move fast. So they either wield one weapon at a time or a combination of bolt pistols and swords. Space wolves practically focus on ripping your face off with lightning claws so they are actual CQC specialists.
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Ah. Good. We got cqc experts now.
But just a tip. Try to describe how you kill your enemies. Mskes the story better.
This story is my favorite
4498646 In a way I'm trying to keep a lower specific on how the character kills them so that I can try to keep the story moving without bogging it down with too much detail... but I do know that a bit more detail would help... so thank you, I really do appreciate all my readers and your feedback
4499085
hey. No problem man. Just trying to help
by the way i came up with a theme for Ticondrius here is a link my friend https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iM4oiPnsrnk
4583871 Definitely a good theme friend.
4583963 thanks, by the way i was wondering when this is going to get updated
4584475 It's going to, I've just hit writers block a little and had a lot of home life to worry about lately, it will... but even my patience is running out with how long it's being delayed.
Is this the story I inspired you to write? :P
4584852 I've probably read a lot of your stories on the site... I wouldn't count my talent anywhere near the authors that can turn out five thousand word chapters... but it's quite possible.
4584530 whoa, the writers own patience is running low from the lack of updates... i am in shock
4585183 Yes, I'm tired of having writers block but recently I've been smacked upside the face with it and then beaten while I was down.
4585465 anyways, i have actually been trying to come up with a cure for writers block, right now it has proven fruitless
4585693 Yeah... Same here... Nothing...
4587341 damn it
4587482 although I do plan on uploading the next chapter soon, so you won't have to wait too much longer for the epic duel between the main character and Ticondrius.
4589298 whoa that's great news
Epic. Loved the helmet strike. Space marines never yield.