Aloha, Folks! I am The Speedster. Lover of Art, Music, Writing, and all that other stuff. I'll write down anything in my spare time, then turn it to a story. I may seem shy, but I can surprise you.
'Regret. Fear. Anger. Sadness. You have done this to yourself."
Luna is trapped on the moon. With no one to speak to, she is forced to go through the worst possible nightmare that she can imagine: Reliving the final moment that led up to her transformation. And she must live this nightmare for the next 1,000 years.
This is my entry for the "Luna is Best Pony!" fanfic competition, with the prompt of what happened to Luna while on the moon. Artwork by http://proenix.deviantart.com/
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Luna wasn't sealed on the moon, but in it. Her essence was merged with the very celestial body she controlled and her mind probably went in a form of stasis.
Not a bad story otherwise.
Nice, does seem like something that someone would cry about. NM has always be someone I didn't like but you pushed it forward.
Furthermore, I spotted a few mistakes, but overall a pretty good story. I wish you luck.
4163192 Thank you kindly! You wouldn't believe how many edits this went through. I'm not sure if I'll win, but it's fun to have a story prompt that others have a take on.
4163682 agreed, I remember in my English classes we would have to write in a notebook for a grade, and my biggest issue was thinking of what to write, but when they gave me a prompt I usually could do it. Occasionally I would come up with something and go crazy (hint hint
) but usually that was my biggest issue
Had a Great description and a good premise, but was ultimately not ale to capitalize upon the energy I think. This was likely due to time constraints with the contest, and I really think it might be super interesting to give this story another pass.
This a great story which is really believable!
4482664 Thanks! Although, I really don't like how short it is. If I ever get the chance, I should rewrite or extend it.
4492911 You're welcome! You don't really need to documenting ore to it though. It's great the way it is! Unless you really want to of course.
Mixed feelings.