Observer, writer (somewhat), crossover enthusiast, what have you.
Even with her sister back to her own throne, Celestia still sometimes neglects to leave her up to date about what she does. Case in point: she has been doing something during the night, away from the castle, with which she doesn't seem to want Luna to concern herself about. Is it something so serious that the sun princess has to deal with it alone? Or is it something completely unimportant?
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That end part sounded a little wonky, you might try re-wording just that part.
(go ahead and message me if you get stuck on the re-wording process-- that is if you want to re-word it!)
Other than that one little thing, I really liked this!
yay for cute Celestia and Luna interaction!!!
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... Whoops.
I guess it may sound weird, yes. Thanks for pointing that out. I'm not good at all with finishing sequences.
I'll edit when I figure out what exactly to place there. Thanks for that!!
Ouch (clutches chest) this one struck close to home. Plus chock full of my favorite princesses! You my friend have earned a favorite!
Interesting.
I love it. Nice job here.
I have decided to sin this because if you're an admin you deserve to be sinned,
That being said, please don't kill me... or even worse...
Ban me.
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Pfft, don't worry. I'm not an admin, actually, I'm just a contributor on that group, so there's no chance of that. Besides, I like to think that I take criticism on the nose well enough.
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Oh, okay then, *sighs*
Here is the Sins Review
EWW "My Own Strength"