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Stardust Speedster


Aloha, Folks! I am The Speedster. Lover of Art, Music, Writing, and all that other stuff. I'll write down anything in my spare time, then turn it to a story. I may seem shy, but I can surprise you.

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After 3 years of being frozen in a block of ice thanks to the mane six, Trixie finally unfreezes to enact her revenge on them, starting with their best friend, Spike. While on Vacation at N. Sanity island, she plans to nab him, no matter what. Little do they know, the two will have bigger problems... This is based off of one of my favorite games/franchise, Crash Bandicoot: Twinsanity. If you have any ideas about character roles or places, I would appreciate it!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 25 )

I like it!

-this has been an official review by Dudofall

Bro.
I freakin' love Crash Bandicoot.
Especially Twinsanity
And you wrote a story of it.
All of my yes.

Trixie's gonna stun Rarity, and take her place to lure Spike into a trap? Oh, that I have got to see. :rainbowlaugh:

Crash Twinsanity was an extremly hillarious game.

Luna could be Madame Amberly
N. Gin could be Snips and Snails
Some random Bisons could play the natives
A younger made-up relative of Trixie as Nina (Nina was made up for Twinsanity, so it fits.)
The Alicorn Amulet spirit possessing the mask for Uka-Uka. And a good version for Aku-Aku.
Spyro could be a transformer, or some other crossover. How about instead of Spyro you just have Crash and/or Cortex?

4117747 My only problem with it that it's pathetically unfinished. Ever tried going that game's history? Man there was a lot awesome stuff cut out. One day I hope we get a remake.

Are you planning on including some of the cut stuff, Stardust Speedster?

4118285 Yeah, there's enough to do a "Did You Know Gaming" segment. There was even a cut level planned likely between "High Seas Hijinks" and "Evil Academy" involving Cortex traveling into Coco's mind.

4118328 There's more than the internet mentions. For example, doesn't it seem strange the N. Trophy and N. Brio come out of nowhere, knowing that you're supposedly hunting treasure?

The concept and story board art reveal that when the Cortex reacts to when Twins first bring up the treasure, there was supposed to cutaway to N. Trophy quickly overhearing them while spitting out his tea.

4118343 The handwave in the finished product is supposedly that Dingodile told them about the treasure, having overheard Cortex mutter about treasure at the end of "Slip Slide Icecapades". Speaking of which, after that level there were plans for a different intro to "High Seas Hijinks". Including an N. Gin voice more in tone with his earlier appearances in the franchise.

(Arguably the best alternative intro that should've been included.)

4118360 I like this cut plot point:

I like this alternate one too:

And two more:

4118379 Numer 8 really should've been included. The finished product lacked any sort of explanation as to where Crash got Mecha Bandicoot.

4118389 I would've taken the ability to skip some cutscenes for multible playthroughs. Or make Evil Crash not glitch into place in the PAL Version.

4118411
Hmm. I did think about Luna being Madame Amberly(although nowhere near as fat:pinkiehappy:)
That was also a really good idea for the natives, thanks for that:ajsmug:
As for the other recurring baddies, you'll see next part. And I do plan to include some of the lost levels or backstories that the game cut out. For example, the Vice-Versa Reversa Device, which was only mentioned in one scene. Even with all the missing content, I hope I can make this story as good as the game itself.:scootangel:

Would've loved for Trixie disguised as Rarity to say "The spikes broke my fall." Fun fact: Where Cortex falls differs from version to version. In the PS2 version he falls to the right, in the Gamecube and X-Box versions he falls to the left. :twistnerd:

4120903
Oh man, I remember that from the game! How could've I forgotten to put that in?! Thank you, now I can fix it.

I guess Snips and Snails will be the evil twins.

4149902
Uhh... Actually, I decided to leave the evil twins as they are. However, I do have a good idea for those two, using a scrapped level. To give a hint, they both are brothers in Crash, and they love to race in carts! :trixieshiftleft:

4208346 Ding Ding! Good job guessing it!
Too bad my computer has been fried, gonna be a while before i can finish the chp.

Keep it coming! :pinkiehappy: It would be sad if this end up to be "unfinished" works.:pinkiesad2:

4967124 Thank you very much! And I don't plan on leaving this unfinished. I just been having trouble writing a few of my stories, but I'm trying to start back back up soon!

This calls for a Video of the spikes moment!

4150143 The Komodo Brothers? Also I hope Mane-iac is used later because I very much enjoyed Ripper Roo. I wonder if someone like Tirek will be N. Tropy or N Brio.

Your not doing the, "Hey, Hey, Hey! Yeah you. I've been doing this for ten stinkin' yers! Back and forward, back and forward. And I'm sick of it! Well I not gonna do it no more!"

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