• Member Since 28th Mar, 2014
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MichelleTwistaloo


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Contains a colt with homosexual tendencies and thoughts, if you'd please not thumbs down merely from it, I'd thank you

Little Pipsqueak has a crush on his little buddy Feather, who unfortunately doesn't share the same feelings for him, after revealing them to him and getting rejected, can he learn to trust again to come out of the closet to his friends?

Read and find out

(also not sure on what categories to put it in, slice of life? Sad? It's not really sad all that much it's just...I don't know)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 13 )

...Did someone really just give a downvote :unsuresweetie::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:? Wow. Anyway, I assume this has nothing to do with "The camera colt and his little Pip"? I thought..... cuz they were already.... hm (I won't give any spoilers). Blah. Ok bah now :pinkiehappy:

This comment doesn't really mAke sense ._. :pinkiehappy:

4157742 You're right, it doesn't make sense. . .Just like how when I'm I go on youtube and lo-

eyes as wide as cart wheels

I like that comparison!

4157742 It's a separate story all together, blame me, I am so nerviscited to start posting stories on the site that I've never been so productive in my life. Also I got gay ponies in my head, don't know why.

4157762 Hah. We all get like that sometimes :derpytongue2:

4157769 I could very well be doing something like finish my homework with this sudden outburst of creativity, or help someone, but no, gay ponies.

At least people are enjoying it, I guess.

As a person who also did a story about this issue, I give a thumbs up.

4157798 Really, you did hun? I've got to check it out, stories where people, ponies or whoever come out of the closet are definitively my things, that's why I tried my hands at it.

I don't hate gay people, but I've read this story about five times already. I'm sorry to tell you this. This story has probably been written about ahundred times before. Even if the writing is good, people will still not like it because they've seen it many times before.

This was a good story!:pinkiehappy:

The only thing I noticed was that you referred to Miss Cheerilee as "he" and said "his students" a few times. I assume that's because English is your second language? (Not that I'm judging, mind you. My second language is French, and I know I'd sound like an idiot if I tried to write a story in French.)

4174757 Blame me, after all, we say "The teacher" with an O "O professor", It just didn't translate, I have to evidently correct it, but to be honest, I'be been bed ridden for the past week or so, that's why I wrote so much, and the energy just sort of fails me right now, but I bet with ctrl + f I can find them and correct them

While it's not perfect, it's okay in my book. But I liked it anyway, so here's as thumbs up.

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