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MichelleTwistaloo


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Silver Spoon's mother is on one of her rare visits to Ponyville, though she competes for Ponyville as an Archer constant trips to train and compete take her away.


To Silver Spoon the rare days where she's with her mother are the best, she can be warm in her presence and be embraced, but all is not without its problems, for a tiny part of her seems to grow a tiny bit of resentment for being away so often.

SilverSpeed can't help but notice a growing distance even as Silver Spoon runs home to embrace her, how will she choose to fix it up?

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Comments ( 9 )

Can someone pass me some salt?

That was a little too sweet for me and i would like to balance it out with something salty.

Quickly now, before i pass out from the sweetness overload.....:twilightsheepish:

Huh, so I wasn't the only one who thought these two might be related?:rainbowhuh: Anyways, great story!:twilightsmile:

You should do more with this two.:twilightsmile: You're story is getting very interesting to read keep up a good work update soon

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*dead*

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You and me both brother!

Sweet story, though I do wish the feelings and emotions of both characters had been a bit more felshed out.

It was nice but it feels incomplete.

To me. This story is incomplete. It should be finished cause technically you ended the story in the middle of a sentence with a verb. Which is a no no.

But either than that it was okay.

it is nice to see a story where that family is not complete bitches

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