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Too Manestream


I draw, write, and play the ukulele. Nuff said.

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Rarity gets attacked by a wolf in the Everfree forest, and Fluttershy (no, not vampony Fluttershy) saves her. But she isn't entirely the same. Nope, you guessed it, she's got a werewolf curse. And it turns out there is another werewolf in Ponyville that's willing to help Rarity learn to control herself so she doesn't kill everypony (and no, not a Mary Sue-ish OC). I HAVE NO REGRETS!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

Has potential but it needs to be longer

No regrets...

No regrets...

I see you YOLO'd on this, didn't you?

Upvoted in the hopes I never have to write YOLO'd again.

this has serious potential. Try your best because this is really good

Odd yet random fact, the Were in werewolf means man. So rarity is secretly a man.

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Only major error I saw was that the pony is named Sapphire Shores, not Shore. Beyond that, great start and I'll be watching.

I would like to point out for your consideration that "were" means "man" so using "werepony" or anything along those lines would technically be incorrect, although I can't think of a better term and people would understand "werepony" easily enough anyway. I suppose that's why that Sonic the Hedgehog game said "werehog" despite being incorrect in their terminology. Whatever you choose to call it, good luck to you. :twilightsmile:

i hope this isnt going where i think it is... but good so far

Octavia...?
This is getting good. Waiting for the third one :pinkiehappy:

More please!
This is amazing! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Quite good i must say:moustache:

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