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Craine


An old writer polishing his ways, giving feedback, and helping fellow authors. Nothing more.

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A compendium of short stories (500+ words) about things Hasbro would crush childhood memories with.

Rated "Teen" just to be safe.

Current Story: Assuming Direct Control

Synopsis: For years, I've watched. For months, I've planned. For weeks, I've waited. For days, I've prepared. For hours, I've laughed. These ponies thought they could have harmony? Thought they're actions, will, and even their lives were there own? No, no, no. I will educate them--I will show them the truth. And I will direct this personally. Not a Crossover

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 3 )

I love Deliver Us From Evil so very, very much.

Quite interesting. I enjoyed these short compilings. I generally like a little more body to a story, but these I liked. There's quite a lot suggested and quite a lot not. My favorite is probably As Daylight Dies just for the storytelling aspect (I actually like Celestia, never figured out why, but hey, good story is a good story.) and I'm not a fan of Assuming Direct Control. It took me longer to understand what was happening for that one but even after I got it, I didn't particularly like it. I think just because I think Twilight is not as emotionally flexible as you portray her, and again, it was a bit short for my tastes.
Just my little two cents on the matter. ^-^ I do have this on my watch now, however, so I look forward to more.

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