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GlitchSequence


My primary art is music, but I can write, as well. Hopefully.

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Pinkie goes through the mane six, seeking their aid to help find her older sister, Maud, a date. It all goes perfectly when she enlists the help of Rarity, whom still keeps her ex, Tom, held hostage in her boutique. What a lovely setting for a dinner date!

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This story is one of the most fantastic reads of the decade. As I read it, everything else around me went silent. Nothing else was there. I was sitting in complete darkness, and all that I could see was my computer screen with this story being displayed. At this point, I was sure that I reached Nirvana. The immersion was so powerful, I began having hallucinations of stroking Tom's rugged, manly body. Overall, this is a must read for anyone who truly wants to be happy.

The local zebras set the most romantic mood possible purely by coincidence—they happened to be sitting outside near the boutique, with their boombox blasting “Straight Outta Compton”.

Best freakin line EVER! :rainbowlaugh:

Loved it! :pinkiehappy:

XD I really don't know what to say. So I'll just laugh. :rainbowlaugh:

Somepony actually sat through ALL of her poems?:rainbowderp:
Lol, she's doin' it with a rock. And its probably not her first time.

I was simply stunned at the sheer brilliance of this read. The words seemed to speak to me (metaphorically of course; stories don't talk) with the fluid style of which they were written. Bravo, good sir!

Absolutely hilarious.

4089976 :rainbowderp: I,uh,um.......will be leaving now. *Slams door*

huehuehuehu-YES!

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And thanks for posting this in your blog, wouldn't have found it if you didn't (because it's not in the popular stories yet, which it should be).

Why is this not popular yet? Is it because it involves grey pone?

4098731 Of course not; grey pone

... ROCKS

All puns and Roger Daltrey screams aside, I thought this was hilarious. As a joke fic, that is. When it come to actual MLP shipping, everybody knows I support Maud X Brooklyn!

So yeah, I give this a hooves up fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/357/9/7/hoof_up_by_comeha-d6z0jqb.png
and a Maud clap. fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/103/a/1/maud_by_comeha-d7ee4tv.gif

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