whaaaat who disliked this? this was amazingly hawt great job as always author

Only error I spotted: "by the Cadence dominating presence."
I believe it should be "By Cadence's dominating presence"
Otherwise, a really good story.
Once again, TittySparkles shows off amazing writing abilities.

This... THIS was a fun one to help with.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Y'know I've been seeing a lot of art lately featuring these three together. Was wondering when someone would do a story. Fantastic as usual TS, you never disappoint.

I ain't gonna sugar coat it. That was hot as all hell... And I mean really freaking hot. You best be proud of yourself...

*Heavy breathing*

Jesus *pant* *pant* that was *pant* one hell of a wank

it had everything. Candace, shiny, trixie, big penis, size rivalry and most importantly: a happy ending for trixie

This goes in the fave bin, shame that it is clip be damned

Wow, I always wanted to know what would it be like, to have futaTrixie and futaCadence in a threesome.
Well, now I know : it's freaking hot

Prolificsparkles

Words

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EPICNESSS!!!

Trixie approves of this awesome story, and demands a sequel!
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it was indeed good but i spotted a lot of spelling and grammar errors.

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Care to point them out so I can punish my editors?

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sure thing, give me about ~2 hours.

“I got an idea,” Trixie whispered

I've

Cadence asked in a teasing one as she slowed

tone

Trixie felt the toy go deeper and deeper in, slowly stretching her walls to accommodate for the small toy to play.

I'm not sure what you were going for here, but it got kind of messed up...

Cadence would constantly switch her eyesight from

constantly switched. and you do this a few more times, as well.

Oh gods, she looks so hot and innocent like that. Was all Shining Armor could

It's customary to italicize thoughts.

she began the spell to give her a magical penis

herself

and also, you wrote

Thee Great And Powerful Trixie

just about every single, but I can't tell if that's an error or if you were trying to draw out the "the"

regardless, I really like this one!

That was awesome!!!!!

"While she cared little for the wedding of her rival’s brother."
Oh shit I forgot! Shining is the brother of Trixie's nemesis. That may come into play later. Better keep reading.

" Oh my goodness, this night is going to be the greatest night of my life!"
Don't say that! Never say that! You'll jinx it.
Or maybe not. Good clopfic, as usual, Titty Sparkles.
I'm always surprised at the amount of detail and set-up you are able to put into your horse-porn.

Hehe... What the hay will happen when Trixie's arch enemy finds out the her BBBFF and Sister-in-law have been having "sessions" with the great and powerful Trixie

Not trixie enough. Needs trixieish dialogue.