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An Intricate Disguise


Selling out has never felt so dirty.

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Always remember, no matter what happens in a harem DON'T FUCK YOUR SISTER!

I say leave it as is. This covers pretty much every harem troupe. I would link to a video covering this but site rules probably would make linking to it against the rules.

As the saying goes; if my grades go down, it’s because my dick is always high. Or, at least, I think that’s how it goes.

I never knew I needed this phrase in my life.

Shining's face in the cover art is saying, "Why me..."

9011458
Why not? The forbidden fruit is always the juiciest.

9011481
and the resulting child may have some serous birth defects as a results

9011508
Harems aren't about getting each other pregnant lol. Besides, I'm sure they have spells to allow them to nut into whoever they want without consequence. On top of that, ponies have to be in heat in order to become knocked up.

9011526
the heat thing from what I can tell varies story to story

9011530
Well, being in heat is from real life. Authors can change things about it to suit their headcannon.

9011558
and I doubt the writers of the show are going to say which is true

this nearly had me laughing myself off my bed, thankfully I managed to stop myself, barely. Good job! :pinkiehappy:

And I was bumbling about like an idiot, falling between all of these girls as if I was paralytic, my eyes desperately attempting to focus on anything other than their rapidly rising and falling bosoms, the roll of their hips, the sway of their bodies… Why did every girl in my school walk around as if she was a model, and why were all of them model material to boot? If this was Hell, then I must have been a good boy.

You did that on purpose!!

9011481

The line about the sister is from a video on YouTube about surviving a harem. This was the “D” of the ABC’s. The video is very good and presented like an older 80’s educational video.

Would you like this to be continued, or is this enough as is?

I say both. Leave this as is and make another 'mature' rated continuation.

"Trapped as a herem boy to four beautiful mares..."
I see nothing wrong with this... *kills myself*

You hath peaked my interest, I look forward to continuation of this story.

MOAR PLZ!!!

Ah, gotta love the law of Harem and on my favorite Pony male no less to ship with a lot of mares. Don't fight it Shining... love em all.

Or at the least bang em and love them

Why would you mark this as completed, you know we already want more.

I vote this NOT continue.

9011560

Writers of a children's show, Explaining to CHILDREN on prime time TV all about Heat and horse Estrous.

Of course thats going to happen.

The Monk

One word....More

Continue?
:trollestia: Yes
:pinkiehappy: Yes
:raritystarry: Yes

Continue and make it longer. Also love the cover art (Since its done by me :pinkiecrazy:)

MORE please would really like to see where this store go’s,

Sorta dumb but still fun, would be nice to see it... Actually written fully, not like... Summarized

Comment posted by RexDraconum deleted Aug 10th, 2018
Comment posted by RexDraconum deleted Aug 10th, 2018

9011508
Only four times more often than in normal pair which is still very unlikely (more than 95% chance to birth perfectly healthy child).

9159190
point still stands tho

Hilarious. Wouldn't mind this being continued

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