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Chapter 1 Author's Note
Oh God I wrote clop whyyyyy... though everyone says that for the first clop they write... sooo
Hopefully it's decent. Next part if it happens will follow Rude Awakening's story line with Twilight showing up. With the SB9K spell...
ALOLOLOLOL! Being a reader of clop, I had to read this just because. And, I admit. I am not disappoint. I would have preferred it have been twilight, but hell, a rarity is fine too.
I found this enjoyable, so you and I both are sick people. I only tried my hand at writing clop yesterday, and it was only a few paragraphs. But I apparently have a talent for it xD
None the less, weird question, you mind if I show my other clop reading friends this? I believe it could be good!
364448 don't mind the comment about the password on the original. I figured it out (you sly devil you)
Very good!
364555
Sharing is fine. And I couldn't start with Twilight, the whole conflict of these stories so far is being on the run from her. But don't fret, the premise of RA is "get into compromising situations with everypony", the premise of this is also "get into compromising situations with everypony".
...this also now has more reads than my non-clop sci-fi story, and it's not even approved yet >_>
Heyya, I'm one of the 'friends' Kintra mentioned.
And man, this was HOT. Some people don't like Rarity, but if you ask me, she is easily the most exploitable where suductiveness is concerned, and this was written wonderfully! You say that you're worried, as this is your first try at clop? Dude, you're a natural. Don't worry about it.
This was also an unusual take on the Human in Equestria genre. Which is good! I'm happy that some dude didn't wake up in the goddamn Everfree again! Also, yeah, a number of questions do come to mind; Rarity, why do you know about humans!? How did you get there Sam?! And to be honest, this in turn has made me question a number of things about this Fic's universe, its past and knowledge for example, in refereance to humans that is... Sorry, I'm babbling on, and I'm sure things will be explained at some point. I presume you're continuing the story?
But yeah, I'm interested good sir. Thanks a lot! And now, we wait... For Twilight to go ape-shit.
Very well written. I rarely get interested in a clop story, but this one I have to put on track. Can't wait to see how this continues.
yeah this is good, really the story seem interesting aswell, ima track it.
What the fuck am I reading!?
I wish I was confused but I'm not and it buuuuuurns!
Nice! Stand and deliver! Woot Woot! *chup-chup-schlick-chup*
well, it looks like poor twilight was missing out and is jealous
this was a really good clop fic. A really creative way to make a spin on HiE.
A little clunky, but ok.
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Ya, reading it later definitely felt that way. Gotta say, writing clop is fairly distracting. Especially when you're trying to accurately visualize the scene and come up with good ideas for action... It definitely didn't translate perfectly.
Hopefully next chapter will be better.
364448 Yeah this was awesome. Can't wait for more.
John, you know you rote a good story when I return to it a good few times, for 10-14 minute breaks at night.
After we finish chapter 3 you better write a new one or I will beat your gun-loving ass.
Your B.A.F.F
-Belgarion
Oh you surrendered to tempation and wrote CLOP, you are going to HELL.
PS: see you there ;)
*COUGH* Just so you know, ponyaddict, this was frakking great. Please continue this, if you have it in ya. I'll be waitin'.
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It hasn't been forgotten. I've been a bit busy with life, and Rude Awakening's ch 6 is almost done, barring a minor writer's block. Which means that Awakened Rudely's ch 2 will come soon after, as soon as I reconcile RA 4-6 to AR's setting.
527273 Thanks for the response! No rush or anything I'm just glad to know its still on the burner, so to speak.
What the hell!!!this exactly what i was gonna write for Chapter 3 of my story!!!!!
I can't believe I read this... so that's what CLOP means. I, wow... I actually kind of ejoyed it but... I am not sure how I feel about that... good story though?
Me and my owner enjoy this very much, often late at night
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YES
so...ever gonna update this?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_unsuresweetie_flip.png
Is this dead or what?
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Now that I'm back on the ball on RA, I'll give this another try.
1443637 It'd be cool if you caught up to Rude Awakening and started posting the equivalent chapters t the same time. I'm not saying it would be practical, just cool.
Well, I finally got around to reading it.
I have to admit that I kinda like it.
Are you going to continue this?
This story can't die... neither should its cousin...
This story musT go on!
Is this story dead or will you be updating it?
It's sad that this story's dead like its cousin.