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Fillyfooler
I am Group admin of 'The Fillyfoolers', I write stories about candy colored ponies making and desiring love. Appleshy is my OTP.
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Also, you should add some kind of divider between the little authors note at the beginning and the story.
It also says it is 0 words long...
Syvvak editing clop. Now I've seen everything.
Seriously though, good job!
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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17288/to-feel-the-music
I have finally done it! I have read a 0 word story. Well according to the story page I have.
Yesterday I arrived back home in Sydney from a two day holiday at the Gold coast with some mates and I was in the mood for a small story, so here is a review of ‘To feel the music’ by Fillyfoller.
Going against the author's name there are no fillies in this just Vinyl Scratch have bit of some ‘private time’ after an annoying day of working because of her manager.
If you weren’t able to understand what I meant with ‘private time’ you either to young and shouldn't be reading this, new to the life’s other meanings or just fucking retarded you dunce, yeah thats right, i’m looking at you Josh.
Now back on track, this is just a quick masturbation story. I do see the appeal of these stories and I knew what I was going into. Just fucking, or getting off because you want to or are stressed, is more common than people think, but even though the same people who protest so fucking much and say it doesn't happen a lot but also say that this story is quite shallow. Talking about depth, but you can only do so much with 1,275 words in the story (says a word counter).
If you think i’m going easy on the story, I say “fuck you, I’m working with what I have and maybe I’m getting to the bad points”.
Like I said, it’s short, and the story opens with Vinyl at home..wait hold that. It stats that she goes into an ‘SP room’ and in my head that is ‘spare room’ but you wouldn’t have a quickie at a recording studio, would you? And at the end it said that she is going back to work to take on her manager, whom she just had a fight with. So she went home, had a quickie, and then when back to work? It can’t be just me but to some extent is that is a bit unusual to have have a stress quickie then go back to the pony who gave you that annoying stress in the first place?
Back to what I was saying before; Vinyl is at home and, going against most fanfictions, doesn't live with Octavia. Unhappy, goes into the ‘SP room’ and clops to the sound of music with the image of Octavia in her mind, and once finished, cleans up and then goes back to work to her manager.
I do think that the story could've been better if, like, the fight or something before the story started was added to give Vinyl more emotion or development, most likely both. I do feel like i’m soft from my holiday because of how his review is mostly a positive one but what can I do when a story is short and put together so well.
Two hooves up.
why does it say 0 words long
3381653 That was the best review ever. Thanks for the smiles
(Also, I saw this story on the side bar of one of my stories and love vinyl scratch, and immediately clicked, only to be slightly disappointed. Why did you remove this story?..............Or was it removed? >_> I have heard of editors but WOW.
The mystery begins of the 0 word story.