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Dude, you'd better kill those links, quick. Site rules: you are NOT allowed to link to NSFW images from anywhere on the site. No exceptions.
One question: do you plan on having futa on male, because I see some male character tags and want to know why.
3989534 I just did. Hope your not pulling my leg.
3990046 Mostly male on herm and herm on herm. A little herm on female/incest. Also a tiny bit of herm on male. Heat season's a bitch.
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Never mind then, futa on female is the only way I can read futa without being disgusted.
I Upvoted this and added it to the read later list.
I haven't faved this,though,because I noticed some things like the fact, that the clop scenes sounded a bit awkward at some points, were too short and not described enough.
Also, i noticed that you don't write numbers out: better write ten and not 10 or three and not 3, and the fact, that they just jumped into rubbing their cocks and a blowjob directly after growing them, and i think i noticed some minor errors.
All in all, everything i pointed out can be fixed in little time, i'll be watching this to see if it improves,and i hope i've been helpful and didn't sound too mean.
i hope to see more of this story
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Hopefully next weekend. School got in the way and my classes are slamming me due to many snow days. Don't worry, this story is not on hiatus. Just have been busy.
So far, so good. Can't wait for Rarity's and Rainbow's reactions.
Way too heavy on the accents.
First off, your description of their dicks and.the growing of them was really clunky and repeated things. Actually you repeated phrases quiye a few times. Secondly, the pacing was terribad. Someone else already said it but they basically grew dicks and started fucking. My last point, and bear with me because i had read this earlier today and i dont remember some stuff, is that i am pretty sure this isnt anthro of humanized. Therefore, they should have.horse dicks not human dicks. Horses dont get circumcisions .
Actually, you might want to go see Luna about the slime.
When did Rarity suck-off Sweetie Belle?
4910225 My bad. I guess I thought it was an escalating adventure in Sweetie's room and that it was presumed to be implied.
Nice...very nice, was hoping tgis would get updated.so I assume scootaloo will be doing it with her (might as well be surrogate sisters) rainbow dash......Hot...
Hehe, whorse.
Big Macs dick should only be about 6-8 inches long. A horse like celestia would have a dick 11 inches long.
Good read. I feel yeah man about the school thing, gotta get that education
I like it so far and can't wait to see what happens next.
I love it was sweet i dan't wait to see what happens next.
I loved it it was sweet and a good read I can't wait to see what happens next.
I loned it all it was a awesome read an sweet .I cant wait to see what happens next.
I fel like you really need to expand on the sex scenes. One paragraph isn't gunna cut it at all.
The scene near the beginning where the CMC find the slime could have been milked for suspense. The CMC could have tried to escape and then, when all seems hopeless, Sweetie faintly remembers a spell Twi taught her long ago.
Oh, please, for the love of God, continue this! I want to read the seven-pony orgy!
I agree with most of the other commentators, I would love to see this touching yet sexy tale continue.
please at least consider adding more chapters to this amazing story.
Okay one the stories chapters from 1-4 were good, two the sex scenes could be dragged out maybe more descriptions of the acts and a bit more senual words could help, but contrary to that the short sex scenes makes the reader want more so great work cause your making me want more. Finally thank you for writing an interesting story.