• Published 21st Feb 2014
  • 4,975 Views, 14 Comments

Not quite what I had planned... - Blissey1



Discord's plan to send Twilight to the ends of Equestria in order to prove that they really are friends has worked out spectacularly! Or at least, he thinks it has. But even the Avatar of Chaos wasn't expecting the Tatzlwurm...

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Comments ( 14 )

I rate this a full Wat out of Carrot.

Short, simple, and hilarious. I love it!

Sweet Celestia's teats[/quote LOL!:rainbowlaugh:

You really should have written more on this, especially from Twilight's and Cadence's POV. While this was short and sweet, it was much too short. I did enjoy it, and I think it'd be awesome if you write more of this. :twilightblush:

3979410 your profile pic is my reaction

To me this was the true ending of the episode, it was just too explicit for children.:twilightblush:

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I thought about doing so, but I felt like it would have just gotten in the way of what I really wanted to write: Discord being Discord.

Amusing.
And, in response to your AN...
Luna's labia.

I didn't know that Graboid was called a Tatzlwurm.:rainbowhuh:

Well, that was certainly a hilarious read. Short, simple, and entertaining.
10/10

3990766 ??? I thought it was an assblaster

I imagine tatzlwurms would be much more popular in Equestria if this was how they functioned... :rainbowlaugh:

I find this a very clever and erotic reading

This was alot funnier than I expected! :rainbowlaugh:

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