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I see you've taken a liking to Coco.
Out of everything in the first few paragraphs, that gave me a boner.
Huh.
Eminem began playing in my head and clearly it was the best idea to start listening to "Lose yourself," while reading through the rest of this. It did nothing but enhance the experience.
The rest is just, well... I thought it was pretty decent. The whole ending bit revealing the purpose/ reason of the glory hole left me staring at the end line with this look plastered on my face:
i.imgur.com/T5AzQhP.png
That was something.
Seems like a great cause and something i'd look into if I ever happened to wind up in Equestria. I mean hell, performing sexual acts to help orphaned children. It's a win-win.
I still can't tell if futa or not. Never have been, and probably never will. Outside of skipping the glory hole scene (I was so excited until the random male pony), this was pretty nice.
I liked it, but I'm so, so confused....
At first I thought that they were futa, but now I'm thinking that you switched up masculine behaviour and terminology to be used by mares instead. Which is still really confusing, unless I'm properly visualizing freakishly long horse-clits like hot dogs sticking out of their vags. Also, I don't recall a 'creampie'...
*Littlepip's internally*
3903404 Thought at least someone ought to write/draw her more "correctly" per se xP Plus, the idea just came to me.
And heh, okies x3
And okay? xD That's good I guess heh.
And I tend to aim to make my fics at least around decent :P Pondered on having multiple endings but went "meh" and just wrapped it up.
And while I don't think there'd too many orphans in Equestria, I wanted to toss in a more "purposeful" glory hole. Not one of the "yay, now I have enough money to attend cock/cunt-suck academy!" or whatnot xD
3904411 It's not. I prefer females. Plus, far too many have ruined them for me with horrible characters and the porn norm. And while they were random, it was included in the content information. Which is where it would have said it was futa in case it'd have been ;P And thanks.
3905807 As said above: It's not xP Anyhow, I always use terminology that anatomically, and/or technically work logic wise. All words I use can be applied to females. The main reason I use said words it to make it "work", as unless you have proper female terminologies that'd "work", I have to use the "male" ones as unisex. As in general, the female terms are "lame" and only work for gentle things. And male only works for rough things. Making it impossible to femdom or even have rough sex. As I could only use "wet" to describe the vulva, and only weak terms to describe the act. Like, I dunno" And then she gave a strong thrust with her delicate, tiny flower"... it just doesn't work... So yeah, if you got suggestions, I'd love to hear them. Otherwise I will stick to using these ones, and hope that the reader are capable of knowing what I mean, along with understanding enough anatomy for it to work. And no, it's "regular" sized clits, around ½ the penis size and girth if I recall what I've seen. And capable to stick out a couple cm outside when flexed. And hum... might have either mislabeled the creampie, or thought a oral cumshot could be described as one.
3910127 Because references :P
3910127 Pip'ing intensifies.
3910909 Yeah, I know, but I was hoping it'd be minor and focus on the fun of lesbians.
3905807
That's exactly what I was imagining. As for the white, I wasn't going to remark on it since mare jizz is usually clear or amberish, but it can be whatever you want it to be. They're cartoon ponies.
EDIT: Disregard the deleted comment below. Accidentally double posted.
3911364 It kinda got sorta equal focus on both. I could technically have done the "smart" thing and kept the glory hole unisex, as is sorta the point with it... ah well, I got a full f/f gloryhole finished (but not posted, waiting for proofreader to turn in finished version) fic you might enjoy in that case... whenever I manage to post it as said.
And well, as said: I don't got much to work with. There exist only one set of terminologies. And to what I've seen, it's usually equally white-ish to males, cept for in heat, then it's more yellow. But that's just what I know and have seen. As said, it's hard to get info on anything that doesn't have a dick xD
And okies.
3912586 Would probably enjoy it.
And as for the terminologies, you don't have to make them dainty. You seemed to be doing perfectly fine with the terms outside of 'length', 'limp', and 'package'. That is what really throws people off, less so package since it can be more easily translated to both genders as long as there aren't previous misleading phrases.
As for the fluids, it's generally clear. About the only time it's white is after mating (because regular jizz) or if it's frothy from being messed with. It can be cloudy, still clear but has a more grayish coloring, but I've never seen white marecome. Maybe I'm just not seeing the right horse breeding videos, or whatever. I dunno.
Trufax.
3912878 Okies. I'll hope it comes out of proofreading within a few months then, proofreader headed off for stuff it seems.
And like said; There's really no other terms for them. And to me "length" works, as it's a distance from the top of the vulva to the bottom of it. "limp" also works as said as females get erections. As for "package", that was more due to a lack or other terms for the collective hindquarters. And there was prior misleading phrases?
And hum... okies. I know I've seen at least one random vid where a mare came misty-ish fluids. Guess it varies same as for humans :P
And sadly it is xP