• Published 8th Feb 2014
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Mr. Tall - the ghost



Applejacks parents never had time to play with her as a filly. As a result she gets a "Imaginary friend" to play with during the day. If only it was just an imaginary friend...

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Begin
Applejack may not remember, but we do.
We are the misplaced

One minute Honeycrisp was cooking in the kitchen, making apple fritters, Applejack's favorite. She was thinking that she had perhaps been a little bit harsh on Applejack. She couldn't be mad at her for long. Tomorrow she would end her being grounded. That's when a tentacle shot out of the window and grabbed hold of her. She screamed.

Honeycrisp was pulled out of the window and thrown onto the ground. She was dazed and she heard gunshots and screaming.

“Why Mr. Tall? Why would you do this!?”

Her husband flew out the window and landed next to her...dead. His body pierced with tree branches.

The monster came after her next. Tentacles impaled her legs and then chest.

She was powerless to resist him.

Meanwhile Applejack was screaming.

“STOP STOP STOP STOP! MR. TALL NO!”

But he didn’t stop he thrashed Honeycrisp around like a rag doll. Bones snapping as she was flung about.

Then he stopped as if listening to something. A tiny heart beat.

He lifted Honeycrip’s pregnant belly up to his ear, trying to locate the noise. Locating it he plunged his hoof into her stomach and pulled out the undeveloped fetus.

It was much too young to survive outside the womb. It was also injured from all the thrashing.

“No…” Said Honeycrisp weakly as she stopped breathing.

Mr. Tall held the bloody fetus in the air wondering what to do with it.

Y-you monster that was going to be my sister... how could you…she started crying…she’s going to die. Just like my parents she's…

Applejack broke into uncontrolled sobbing.

Now Slender Mane doesn’t understand humans very well, but in this one second he had a moment of clarity.

1. Applejack was no longer having fun.

2. She was sad that this creature was dying.

3. He didn’t want her to be sad.

Slender Mane bent down and picked up some of Honeycrisp’s spattered insides. To Slender Mane it seemed like spare parts. She took out the fetus's broken organs and replaced some of them with Honeycrisp's working organs.

“That won’t work you dummy she’s too young.” Said Applejack though tears.

Slender Mane took note of this.

He took off his suit coat, leaving him in just a dress shirt, and placed it over the fetus for about ten seconds.

When he removed the coat, the fetus was gone and in its place was a one year old filly.

Slender Mane placed her in Applejacks arms.

He patted her on the head, picked up her parents and dragged them away to the Everfree Forest.

G.U.L.L. arrived shortly after.



And that’s when we were born.

-themisplaced

Comments ( 17 )

3912692
I'd love to be your prereader

Can't wait for chapter 3. :raritystarry:

when comes the chapter 3 yer story is sooooooo awsome :pinkiehappy: :ajsmug:

3929777 well you could wait a week or you can go read slender shy. is the same store but more spread out among chapters

3929806 how is this human creature relevant could we not simply be rid of it?-the lost one

Talk about a tear-about. :pinkiegasp: Slender is as brutal as ever though oddly comforting for younglings.

WE NEED MOAR!!!!!!!!!!

4025874 no actually this means applebloom will have her special talent but not in her but.

4068416 oh...no but tattoo for applebloom .....:rainbowlaugh:

... Im not going to be able to sleep tonight,am I?this story was still sweet ,though.:applejackconfused::applecry:

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We still walk

I thinks sweet that Slendermane didn't want to see Applejack sad, does any of this relate in the other story, like when AJ sees him again?

You know I wonder how Slendermane is going to react to Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon when he sees them bullying
Applebloom for the first time.

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