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Matthais Unidostres


I am Matthais Unidostres, I'm a Christian and I love FanFiction!

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Scootaloo is missing. Vanished. Rainbow Dash is extremely worried about her little sister, and things soon grow form bad to worse when Goldie Delicious arrives in Ponyville to inform the ponies that Scootaloo has been taken by a creature known as Slendermane. Desperately wanting to save her sister, Rainbow Dash makes it her mission to confront Slendermane and get Scootaloo back. But could it be that it's already too late to save her?
Inspiration comes from "Slender: The Arrival"

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 38 )

>using slendermane in 2014

GREAT JOB!!! I SAW SLENDER MANE I AM SECRETLY PIKIE PIE!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: you mad bro

4205213 You do know there's a group called Slendermane/Slendermare that you could be a member and drop your story off.

Oh my goodness I can't wait to read more I hope scoots and Dash are ok and that Slendermane would just go away he creeps me out anyways onward for another awesome chapter!

Oh my gosh that was soooo AWESOME!! :rainbowkiss: I'm so glad that Dashy's ok, I can't wait for more! Keep up the awesome work

this isn't some super grimdark story is it?

kinda hate what people have done with slenderman. murdering and killing just makes, well, too much sense. if it is supposed tobe an eldritch thing then why would it commit murder? kililng has too many factors that can be comprehended.

Aaawww Button!!! I can't wait for more keep up the awesome work :twilightsmile:

4256226 No, it's not at all grimdark compared to the stuff Slenderman does in the games.

This is so good. HOW DOES IT ONLY HAVE 138 VIEWS.!!!!!! This is wrong why don't people notice the good stuff on fimfiction. This make me mad:flutterrage:

Diamond will die? Ffuu yes!

Holy Crap, crazy ass story. Good thing Tiara's little bitch ass is gonna die >:D fucking bitch deserved it! Almost cried too, not even ganna front ;)

Awwwwww the part with Scoots and Dash was soooo cute! I loved this story it was an awesome read :rainbowkiss: thank you so much for an amazing story :twilightsmile:

Hahaha! Just Deserts for Diamond Tiara!:pinkiehappy:

"A pony like that could never-ever-ever-ever-ever-ever smile! Ever! That's SCARY!" Pinkie Pie exclaimed.

:pinkiecrazy: Yeah.

Slender mane song.:flutterrage:

Slender mane is dead.:rainbowdetermined2:::rainbowlaugh:

:scootangel: SHE BETTER BE OK!!!!:rainbowdetermined2:

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Its because they insult trees. :pinkiecrazy:

DON'T INSULT TREES,That is, if you don't mind....

Please dont make another. This is perfect.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::raritywink:

good chapter, but I should tell you that there is only 7 pages on here instead of 8

I demand you make a sequel to this awesome story

That was the best slender story EVER button just saying "I gave him 20 bits." with a shrug But im confused how did scootaloo not get held ik she was one of the chasers but still im confused anyone mind explaining? Also diamond tiara failing and it probaly was slendermane was quite sensitive about diamonds comments so i would do the same :)

:derpytongue2::rainbowlaugh::pinkiecrazy:
(XDidk wat to say so there goes some expressions)

* starts clapping*
Awsome (than starts laughing like crazy):rainbowlaugh:

I'm putting together my own Slendermane fic, but it doesn't follow the format of the game -Slender- instead taking it's style more from the Slenderman VLogs. I would really appreciate any advice and perhaps your opinion on the story's concepts, if you have the time. I plan on reading through this story here, to get a few ideas.

Rainbow and Scootaloo both play a major role in my story; but unlike this, the entirety of the C.M.C. are missing and all their respective sisters are on the warpath.

I plan on dividing the story into three parts: the 'Memories', the 'Entries', and the 'Interludes'. Memories are Rainbow and her team, looking for the missing fillies; Entries are the C.M.C., trying to retain their sense of self, while running from Slendermane; Interludes are scenes ripped from the future/past, placed into odd places in the story thanks to Slendermane's unusual powers. These will foreshadow future events, show scene's that happened 'off screen' and give some insight into what brought all the horror about.

Well, that was a text dump... If you find the time; opinions? :twilightsheepish:

-Inkheart

Yaay, Slendy be doing good....sorta...:twilightsheepish:

quite an interesting first chapter

this is quite interesting, though I’ve never played any horror games, but I still like the story

I wonder what slendermare is going to do to Diamond Tiara, hmmm

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