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MasterZero


Comments ( 31 )

Interesting idea and definatly well written...the sex stuff is a bit creepy but i kinda want to see how the ponies react to that :pinkiesick:

350705

Its supposed to be creepy. The guy is a paraphilia. He has a thing for hurting others, children, and non-humans.

this will end perfectly :pinkiecrazy:, i am sure of it :pinkiehappy:

This seems like a really good story! Tracking! :twilightsmile:

what the hell?
i like it...but dont...but i do...but yet i dont......
GAH! I CANT DECIDE!
-bashes face on a brick wall-

images.4chan.org/mlp/src/1332371659918.png Dis Gunna Be Good Heres a Present For your hard Work Keep it cuming

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...I can't tell if you're being sarcastic or not.

350790
(I stop you and give you some bandages for your head) Please don't hurt yourself. :fluttershysad:
Maybe try flipping a coin or whether you do or don't? Or weigh your pros and cons?

350776
Thank you.

350725
Hell yeah.

350818 im not im tracking this shit it looks so damn cool also images.4chan.org/mlp/src/1332372197533.png

350818
-grabs your head and smashes it with mine-
-i stop-
okay, just tell me this
WHAT THE FUCK!
-goes back to bashing our heads-

350857 violence is not the awnser bro images.4chan.org/mlp/src/1332373234045.jpg but keep it comeing

Seem interesting. Tracked for later :pinkiehappy:

Very well written! Can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:

If I can make a pedophile likable, or even tolerable, or just have people feel bad for him, than I would have succeeded as a writer.

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Quite. Indeed. Verily.

.....if you have written some more can i get your progress this is probably the most interesting story ive read mainly because this guy is mentaly disturbed if you can classify someone like that keep up withthe good work!

Mindbuck. Not looking forward to any rape personally, but eh, I'm interested on how this ends.

Interesting concept. Thought it would suck at first, but the more I went into the story the better image you've created of this guy. Sure he enjoys hurting people, but it seems this stems from a childhood full of abuse. You've captured the concept of a paraphilia perfectly, which is a very good author trait to have. Not being a paraphilia, but the ability to enter the psyche of any type of person and write their thoughts.
Have a mustache for a job well done!!!!:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

This is so wierd but I still love it so much!

Have a Thumb from me

FINALLY! im so happy this updated!

Yes I've been waiting for this:yay:
Can't wait for the next chapter:rainbowwild:
Do we have to wait over two months again:fluttercry:

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Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye. You do not.

More:pinkiecrazy:
I can't stop reading this

What the Fuck!

where is the MOAR!!!!!! NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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