• Published 1st Feb 2014
  • 3,703 Views, 49 Comments

Cream Pie - Gol D Colt



A sad friend is never a good thing in Pinkie Pie's eyes, especially if she has a huge crush on said friend. So when her crush, Rainbow Blitz, comes over for the weekend, it's up to her to help cheer him up.

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Comments ( 27 )

Dude, I wasnt expecting pinkie to be this forward.:rainbowderp:

3997131 Dude this is Pinkie were talking about :ajbemused:

3997175 Do you want me to edit these chapters. Right now you've been dropping quotation marks and commas all over the place.

4065908 Yes please. English maybe but my first language be that don't mean you can't suck at it.:twilightblush:

Well fuck...that was hot. For your first scene that was very well done. Editing still is a bit shoddy but I can see you'e working on that. Great job man.

4066420 Alright, although it may take me a bit to get around to it. Right now it's dead week and I'm focused on a studying. Like is there a specific date you want it done, and how do you wanna receive the edited ones.

4070686 I don't care that much on when it done just as long it don't take one month I'm good. but keep me updated if you have to do something that result in delaying the editing!

4066953 You sound surprised, did you not expect someone to give you a almost fully positive comment?

4071788 Well not from my first fic:twilightblush:

4071795 I believe that everypony needs a little encouragement. I loved the story, and look forward to any and all fics in the near future.:heart::moustache::yay:

4176941 Just asking here:twilightblush:, but if your that scarred from the original then what made you read something that has any relations to that story.

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Bruh. This is a clopfic, and we've established that. That doesn't mean it has to be smut.

PinkieXBlitz is best ship I need moar :flutterrage: i mean if you don't mined :fluttershysad:

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4634399 tottally agree too bad theres not a lot of the shipping whyyyy:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

I demand MOAR that is is you want to write more

I want to like this
But it has 69 likes... And I don't want to mess that up

5354960 how about 79 likes?

5942747
yes but 79 isn't a sex joke

5942759 Ah yeah, that is right.
79 hs no real value anywhere.
whereas 69 is a sex related figure, but not just in Anglic.
Then you should feel free to vote now.

Part of me still wants to see a Fluttershy/Mac clop as a bonus to this, but considering that it's completed, it's a pipe dream, not to mention that there are probably other FlutterMac clopfics out there that we would view.

It's really nice that in true Pinkie fashion, she took away Blitz's depression, took away Fluttershy's guilt (come on, I'm pretty sure that Fluttershy knew Blitz had a huge crush on her and she pretty much broke his heart by fucking and then dating his best friend Mac; it's in her nature to care for others regardless whether he/she needs it or not), and also gave Blitz a new love interest/marefriend that actually reciprocated his feelings. Not to mention that Pinkie has a cute and loyal coltfriend in Blitzy now..:pinkiesmile::heart:

I have to wonder why it was just Rainbow Blitz that was R63'ed while the others stayed their canon gender, though. Probably just a choice of the author.

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Part of me still wants to see a Fluttershy/Mac clop as a bonus to this, but considering that it's completed, it's a pipe dream, not to mention that there are probably other FlutterMac clopfics out there that we would view.

Oh don't worry you'll get a Flutter/Mac clop,:ajsmug: but it'll be in a different story.

I'm pretty sure that Fluttershy knew Blitz had a huge crush on her and she pretty much broke his heart by fucking and then dating his best friend Mac; it's in her nature to care for others regardless whether he/she needs it or not.

The thing is Fluttershy may know the first thing about how to care for animals both physically or emotionally, but she kinda oblivious when it comes to reading other emotions, especially when they keep as well hidden as Blitz.

I have to wonder why it was just Rainbow Blitz that was R63'ed while the others stayed their canon gender, though. Probably just a choice of the author.

Yay sounds about right, and I want to thank you for like reading the story.:twilightsmile:

Not bad for a first story

"Like"

I liked this story, with the idea of just a few ponies genderswapped instead of everyone

6707988 What!? Oh come on I would never do something like that.:pinkiecrazy:

101st like do I get something like a prize maybe?

I'll let you decide though whatever it is I will take it. On the other hoof Punch Out is GG have you beaten the fat guy yet? I've beaten him like 30 times doesn't get old though. I also like him as a Smash Bros. character though his recoveries suck.

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