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Gol D Colt


Hey I'm Gol D Colt (or Gol for short) And I adore writing stories with massive tasty hoots and gender bent characters.

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Interesting but it needs a serious sweep for missing words and incorrect tenses. ill give it a once over after work today and send it to ya.

For a minute there I thought this was a clever ruse of a trap...:pinkiecrazy: soooo happy to be wrong.

3905951 Me clever:rainbowlaugh: don't make me laugh.and beside I'm more crazy than I am clever.:ajsmug:

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Oh I dunno... brilliance and madness tend to be traits that coincide. :eeyup:
:pinkiehappy:

3906000 You make a good point:twilightsmile: but You get to use chainsaws more often on the side of madness:pinkiecrazy:

Loved how u added Tanks thoughts to the story

!!!JESUS ALPHABATIC CHRIST!!! man what the fuck did you post the chapters in reverse if not then allow me qoute myself what the fuck. O,K lets get serious if your going develop the charecters then go ahead that what i would say if this was a teen rated story but this is a clopfic. And clopfics are written much more diffrent then the regular stories if your going to develop your charecters then do it during the earlier chapters not the later chapters are ment for sex not charecters and you already teased the readers with the previous chapter so most readers would want the sex scene now. Im telling you this because i can tell this is going to be good clopfic also im easliely the biggest pervert on this site.:pinkiehappy::pinkehappy:

3906652 Dude I understand want your saying. :twilightblush: But the thing is I've read some good clopfics that had more story and character then clop itself and their doing well. Another thing the chapters ain't out of other. Chapter 2 serves as a flashback chapter if you will. but if your main concern is the clop don't worry the next chapter and bonus chapter will more then makeup for the lack of clop so far.:ajsmug:

Look, I appreciate how you're trying to get more character development, but the grammar really killed it. :facehoof: Be it from wrong tenses, missing a quotation mark, or having stuff like: "-until it get old-" :pinkiesick: I would highly recommend a prereader to scan these chapters. Otherwise, a valiant effort. :twilightsheepish:

3908760 Oh Stop it :twilightblush: I'm not that sly.

no alternate universe tag , so what's the deal with there being r63 of canon characters then?....

Dude, I wasnt expecting pinkie to be this forward.:rainbowderp:

3997175 Do you want me to edit these chapters. Right now you've been dropping quotation marks and commas all over the place.

4065908 Yes please. English maybe but my first language be that don't mean you can't suck at it.:twilightblush:

Well fuck...that was hot. For your first scene that was very well done. Editing still is a bit shoddy but I can see you'e working on that. Great job man.

4066420 Alright, although it may take me a bit to get around to it. Right now it's dead week and I'm focused on a studying. Like is there a specific date you want it done, and how do you wanna receive the edited ones.

4070686 I don't care that much on when it done just as long it don't take one month I'm good. but keep me updated if you have to do something that result in delaying the editing!

4066953 You sound surprised, did you not expect someone to give you a almost fully positive comment?

4071795 I believe that everypony needs a little encouragement. I loved the story, and look forward to any and all fics in the near future.:heart::moustache::yay:

OH THANK GOD THIS DIDN'T GO IN THE DIRECTION I ASSUMED IT TO GO. Seriously, I've done a good job pretty much blanking out the gory details from the original after reading them the first time, and I did NOT want to go through that once more. 'Specially since I JUST read this at 12:30 at night. NO WAY I'm getting nightmares before classes tomorrow. :raritydespair:

4176941 Just asking here:twilightblush:, but if your that scarred from the original then what made you read something that has any relations to that story.

3906652 'im easliely the biggest pervert on this site.'
Challenge accepted.:rainbowdetermined2:

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Bruh. This is a clopfic, and we've established that. That doesn't mean it has to be smut.

PinkieXBlitz is best ship I need moar :flutterrage: i mean if you don't mined :fluttershysad:

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4634399 tottally agree too bad theres not a lot of the shipping whyyyy:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

I demand MOAR that is is you want to write more

4176941 i kinda wana read the original now. Sounds interesting.

I want to like this
But it has 69 likes... And I don't want to mess that up

5942759 Ah yeah, that is right.
79 hs no real value anywhere.
whereas 69 is a sex related figure, but not just in Anglic.
Then you should feel free to vote now.

Part of me still wants to see a Fluttershy/Mac clop as a bonus to this, but considering that it's completed, it's a pipe dream, not to mention that there are probably other FlutterMac clopfics out there that we would view.

It's really nice that in true Pinkie fashion, she took away Blitz's depression, took away Fluttershy's guilt (come on, I'm pretty sure that Fluttershy knew Blitz had a huge crush on her and she pretty much broke his heart by fucking and then dating his best friend Mac; it's in her nature to care for others regardless whether he/she needs it or not), and also gave Blitz a new love interest/marefriend that actually reciprocated his feelings. Not to mention that Pinkie has a cute and loyal coltfriend in Blitzy now..:pinkiesmile::heart:

I have to wonder why it was just Rainbow Blitz that was R63'ed while the others stayed their canon gender, though. Probably just a choice of the author.

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Part of me still wants to see a Fluttershy/Mac clop as a bonus to this, but considering that it's completed, it's a pipe dream, not to mention that there are probably other FlutterMac clopfics out there that we would view.

Oh don't worry you'll get a Flutter/Mac clop,:ajsmug: but it'll be in a different story.

I'm pretty sure that Fluttershy knew Blitz had a huge crush on her and she pretty much broke his heart by fucking and then dating his best friend Mac; it's in her nature to care for others regardless whether he/she needs it or not.

The thing is Fluttershy may know the first thing about how to care for animals both physically or emotionally, but she kinda oblivious when it comes to reading other emotions, especially when they keep as well hidden as Blitz.

I have to wonder why it was just Rainbow Blitz that was R63'ed while the others stayed their canon gender, though. Probably just a choice of the author.

Yay sounds about right, and I want to thank you for like reading the story.:twilightsmile:

I liked this story, with the idea of just a few ponies genderswapped instead of everyone

After reading this chapter, this comes to mind.

6707988 What!? Oh come on I would never do something like that.:pinkiecrazy:

101st like do I get something like a prize maybe?

I'll let you decide though whatever it is I will take it. On the other hoof Punch Out is GG have you beaten the fat guy yet? I've beaten him like 30 times doesn't get old though. I also like him as a Smash Bros. character though his recoveries suck.

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