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Ponyess
I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP
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Lesson 1: Never post a lot of chapter at once. First write and post 1 and 2 and then write more.
Lesson 2: Never less than a 1.000 words per chapter.
3870246 could you point at any detail you're missing in the story?
3872906 No. This is beyond saving. Remove it all, rewrite the first chapter to have more than 1.000 words and then come ask for tips.
This is painfully unedited. Looks like it wasn't even put through a spell checker.
3876504 now you are a bit dramatic, right?
I guess Open office spell checker is a bit low on quality, but not that bad?
3875346 on the matter of 1,000 words, chapters 4 and 7 should be up to the limit of yours?
dare I ask you on these?
unless you're only going into full stories?
3876589 Yes, most chapters are a few hundred words above 1.000. So anything above 1.000 is good.
3876626 from this premis, it isn't my best story.
which leave me wondering what drew you into this in particular?
I hope it is more then the chort chapters, which I doubt are vissible before you actually viewed the story?
uh, and a somewhat off topic question;
what does the avatar mean, it looks like chinese, but I'm not the expert here.
3876671 I was browsing newly submitted stories and come across this one. Full stories with short chapters stand out and are usually a bad sign. I always took a look then.
The character is Japanese for Dragon.
3876730 if you're commonly browsin new stories, you'll be bound to bump into more of me.
I hope the next will be more to your taste.
"Usually", as in there are Exceptions?
Japanese, that's close, sthey started from Chinese in the first place, as far as I recall.
Japanee use regular Alphabets, as far as I understand it.
was it 2 or 3, they seems to have names for it, but I keep foretting.
The 'Dragon', interesting.
why did you choose this sign?
if you don't mind me asking?
I guess I do prefer Japanese(Japan) so that's good.
are you looking at any of the films too?
3876792 Jesus christ. You're too curious.
""Usually", as in there are Exceptions?"
Well what else does 'usually' usually mean?
3876838 Maybe I should have called my avatar Curious?
just that I hope I'm more then that.
besides, it would be too bland, and none would notice me.
if I at least had an Avatar with an original face?
oh well, have fun pickin on the next too short story?