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Music ponies are best ponies.

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The survivors of the changeling swarm that invaded Canterlot have learned their lesson: ponies are too resistant to be taken as a food source through violence. Fortunately, there are other ways for a changeling to feed. It is so much easier just to pick vulnerable ponies and brainwash them into willing servitude. They can even be sent out to bring back more victims!

On a related note, Vinyl Scratch picked the wrong night to leave the club with a pair of unfamiliar ponies.

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Goddamn...

Short and creepy.

Nice work!

~Skeeter The Lurker

...I'm not sure how to feel about this.

Feels like part of a larger work, but hell if I know what that larger work would be.

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Really, it's just me trying my hand at something a little darker than my normal works. I was aiming for the idea of letting readers fill in the larger picture, just giving them enough to creep them out (hopefully).

3857128
Exactly what I was aiming for, thanks!

Aww... No explanations or anything, just a creepy lil story with not much purpose than being what it is.

Pretty cool story, I haven't seen any other story that tackled mind control the way you did.
I just feel that you skipped a little too much at the end, it would've been interesting to see how the pods work and how Vinyl's mind slowly gets altered. But it was a nice short read nontheless.

you got my thumbs up

PresentPerfect
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short, but quite well done :)

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Thank you for the kind words about this ancient thing!

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