It's been a year since Dusk Shine's coronation and many years since Artemis return from his banishment and Night-terror Nebulous is long gone. However, the stars are telling him something. That some pony that he loves has appeared again. However, another evil wants to use her for their own means. He must correct his mistakes before she is lost to him forever.
To Everyone:
Please give comments and critiques. I also appreciate suggestions. Those who dislike the story, I would like comments to back up your reason. It doesn't make the story any better if you don't give me a reason why. Thank you!
To My Dear Readers:
I need some editors to catch my mistakes and make the story better. The deal is editors get to see what the next chapter would be like and I'll give them the password to excess unpublished passwords. Anyone who would like to please message me. I'll be really grateful! >W<
PS: I have been really super busy these days. I'm afraid the only time I can update on a story is during the summer. Sorry guys! Please be patient.
lol the picture I put together using damuro
The party Silverspirit got whisked away to
photoshop skills to the power!
Plz write more?
PLZZZZZ?
3851943 lol trying to.
The way you portrait her shows that she is a sweet little filly. ITS SO CUTE! She is sweet, is respectful and is easy to love.
HOW CAN THAT NOT BE SO !@#$ING SWEET?!
Sorry. Watched too much Mr. Torgue recently
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I'm glad that you like her. I hope you find her more endearing in the 2nd chapter. >w<
This story seems interesting. Keep it up. This seems to be one of the first rule 63 story I have read in a while.
3852252 Thanks! I'll try my best to make this story interesting as possible and hopefully better
nice story so far! Keep it up!
Are you sure you didn't forgot a Halo above her head, I find it rather fitting for the description you gave us
3858910 lol she's alive. she's just been asleep for a long time like him
Me and my army supports this story
3878881 Thank you so much! I'm also sorry because im still working on chapter 3
I liked this chapter. I wonder how long Silver will stir clear of Berry, because as soon as he finds her, it's party time. I can't wait for the next chapter.
3885413 Lol yes it will be party time. I going to add the meeting with Elusive and Berry together.
Nice chapter, but i noticed that you repeat some paragraphs twice. you might want to fix that. but other than that, good job. can't wait for more.
*-Raven Talon
3919928 Thanks! And also thank you for the fav. btw: still on chap 4. it's halfway done >W<
3920473 well you're welcome, dude. Can't wait till its up. Also, just throwing this out there, if you ever need some help, just pm me. I can't really write but i can edit and help with ideas, i guess.
*-Raven Talon
3920503 kay! awesome! I'll send you the rough daft of chapter 4 once I'm done then
3920524 ok
Note: even though Artemas was a tom-cat in Sailor Moon, Artemas, Luna, and Diana are all names to the same goddess of the moon
But other than that I like it
3958236 lol, now that you mention it, I forgot Artemis the tomcat from Sailor Moon. Thanks! I apologize for still working on Chapter 4. I'm sooooo clooosseeee
Nice job with this profile of Silverspirit. I can't wait though for the next chapter of the story to be released.
3959074 Thanks. Hopefully it will be good.
Nice chapter. I'm glad that you were able to update this story.
3961279 thanks. it took forever to finish that chapter. The next chapter is going to take some time.
Nice picture.
3965749 thanks. I couldn't make the holes though and the purple mist coming from his eyes.
3965814 Sorry about that. If you want to you could try editing it in paint.
3965846 I can try
3965846 lol I only got the purple mist to work