• Member Since 26th Oct, 2012
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Overwhelming Light


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Was really short and could use a more expansion on the sex bit to make it usable to jack off to but all in it wasn't that bad for what it was.

But it might just be my bias in the form of my slave sex fetish.

All those downvotes are just from butthurt people that saw Slave Auction.


What.

Maybe...
Yes?
No.:raritydespair:

Nice Story

Very interesting concept and I agree with the first poster -- expanding on it could put it onto the featured stories list.:twilightsmile:

:pinkiegasp: AWESOME! I skipped the clop but the ending was just.... :pinkiehappy:

Not bad. I certainly like the idea.

:pinkiecrazy: Bravo! Genius! I love it!

:pinkiehappy: Seriously I like it, please keep up the epic work my good sir.

I love the twist. :pinkiecrazy: I wouldn't change a thing. :rainbowdetermined2: Perhaps edit the grammar and syntax a bit, but the overall story is great.:scootangel: :unsuresweetie: :applecry: :derpytongue2:

i say it should be longer, but thats just me lol
and the slave auction is a bit hard to swallow especially the fact pinkie and fluttershy seem to be the ring leaders. but meh
but i need to say this
the fact that shes a changeling...a CHANGELING wouldent she get more love from every stallion there who wanted any mare he wanted? i mean im sure they would fight over her just for the fact she can change into other mares!
reason i would date Mystique <3
anyway not a bad story just would of liked for it to have been longer XD

Now totally lost to the feeling he began to buck into her.

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