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Overwhelming Light


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The son of a great warrior must step up to the plate when Equestria is attacked by an unknown enemy. The teen must learn the truth to his father's great abilities and control them as his father once had. The young warrior must face many challenges to find out the truth behind the attacks, but it seems any progress he makes does not bring him any closer to his goal.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 6 )

..... i'm not sure about this, it's missing something. Maybe more prologue?

The chapters from here and out should be better than these two. Those two chapters were written while i was at school and just thinking of cool ideas. :twilightblush: It should get better i promise. If anypony sees mistakes or has any questions please just ask or tell me. :twilightsmile:

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His father said filly hood instead of colt hood XD

“Shut up and come on. You don't want to be late to the meeting with the Princesses.” Bent grunted and pushed me towards the door.

Nice friend ya got there

3022481 Yeah, i messed up the first 3 chapters pretty bad, it doesn't flow well. :raritycry: I hope the newer chapters are better and show better traits.

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