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Mike the Red


I do this just for fun -- but sometimes I take myself a little too seriously. I know life's too short, but -- you know...

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I suppose the story deserves a facehoof -- as I stated in the description, I wrote it primarily for my own amusement. I'm sorry it didn't meet with your approval. I shall try harder next time. :twilightsmile:

umm.. wow... well, that happened

Hah! This story amuses me. Continue!

More more more more more you must make more

There are too many interesting stories going around and not enough time to make one or read one >_<.

I think tia might have 'cough' ulterior motive for him
staying at the castle.
:trollestia:

I bow to your writing ability. Also, I present the gift of sleeping Twilight Sparkle. mlp.bartstuff.eu/mlp-tsleep.png

3794596 Thanks for the kind words and the favorite on this story as well. I am in the process of writing a second chapter to it, though I need to go through it again and fix some things I'm not quite satisfied with. :twilightsmile:

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If you need some help, let me know. :pinkiehappy: I hope you have fun writing this fic, I'm sure I'll have fun reading it. :rainbowwild::rainbowdetermined2:

Hmm, I dislike Trixie in this one though. She wants to much. That is probably going to be her role in this story:D.

Wouldn't surprise me if either Luna or Celestia decides to fuck him back eventually. And make him doubt himself in wanting to leave.
Afterall, Celestia clearly showed that she is a master in transformation magic.

I'm LOVING the story, it's a perfect mixture of clop and plot story.

~~Flutter-Shy~~

More and I want a molestia x (pony version of Michael)

Great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one. Also, I can't wait for Blueblood to get his! :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

As long as he doesn't get pregnant. I'm ok with everything else.

I so want to see Celestia pounding into that tight plot... :pinkiehappy:

*Patiently awating more storyclop.*

THIS IS AWESOME!

~~Flutter-Shy~~

my likeness for the clop is contradicting with my my dislike that celestia basically forced someone from there home so said person could become the equivalent of a sex toy

The first image in my head after reading this was onenof Clarence Callahan (NFSMW) Razor.:facehoof:

3953018 I have never played that game and have no knowledge of the character you speak of. After looking him up on google, I get the impression he's a selfish back-stabbing bastard. I had no intention of making the protagonist in this story like that at all, and if that's your impression, I apologize for not writing it better. I am still trying to improve my writing skill and even though it's improved to some degree, it's still not where I would like it to be.

Also, as I stated in the description, I wrote this story for my personal amusement -- I know there are some people who don't care for such things, but I felt compelled to share the story anyway.

Thanks for reading it -- I hope future chapters might meet with your approval. :twilightsmile:

Fuck bluebitch but you made him a nice guy what happened dude

Can it be? Can there be someone who can brake Blueblood and make him less of an asshole?:twilightoops::facehoof::pinkiecrazy:

I want celestia to impregnate amethyst

4123169 She's capable of doing that -- it would be quite awkward for Amethyst and I'll have to admit, the foal would be very interesting...:pinkiehappy:

I KNEW HE JUST NEEDED TO GET LAID:pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy:

I thoroughly appreciate this fiction... and the extras that go with it. :derpytongue2:

This upcoming scene is gonna be good. :pinkiecrazy:

4210323 I gotta ask though, have you actually ever thought about what it would feel like to go through what this character goes through?:trixieshiftright:

4210547 It's one of the reasons why updates take awhile for this story -- I contemplate possible scenarios and the character's thoughts as he/she interacts with the ponies. :twilightsmile:

4210578 I respect that, my friend. It's that that gives the story it's life.

Honestly the ONLY way to make BlueFucktard likeable...IS TO KILL HIM VERY SLOWLY. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Ok. First ten seconds of Mike being in Equestria....

:pinkiesick:

Yup. Too fucked up for me. Bye.

4434942 You could have read the disclaimer...:rainbowlaugh:

If you accept a suggestion, in the most intense clop, did you think about put a advertise like (Clop Begin here) (Clop end here)?

6071654 I suppose I should have done so with the chapter titles -- or perhaps I might go in and edit the story to demarcate the more intense clop scenes.

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