I suppose the story deserves a facehoof -- as I stated in the description, I wrote it primarily for my own amusement. I'm sorry it didn't meet with your approval. I shall try harder next time.
3794596 Thanks for the kind words and the favorite on this story as well. I am in the process of writing a second chapter to it, though I need to go through it again and fix some things I'm not quite satisfied with.
I suppose the story deserves a facehoof -- as I stated in the description, I wrote it primarily for my own amusement. I'm sorry it didn't meet with your approval. I shall try harder next time.
umm.. wow... well, that happened
Hah! This story amuses me. Continue!
Unf!
More more more more more you must make more
More please!!
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3779511 Working on it...
There are too many interesting stories going around and not enough time to make one or read one >_<.
I think tia might have 'cough' ulterior motive for him
staying at the castle.
I bow to your writing ability. Also, I present the gift of sleeping Twilight Sparkle. mlp.bartstuff.eu/mlp-tsleep.png
3794596 Thanks for the kind words and the favorite on this story as well. I am in the process of writing a second chapter to it, though I need to go through it again and fix some things I'm not quite satisfied with.
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If you need some help, let me know. I hope you have fun writing this fic, I'm sure I'll have fun reading it.
Hmm, I dislike Trixie in this one though. She wants to much. That is probably going to be her role in this story:D.
Ok. First ten seconds of Mike being in Equestria....
Yup. Too fucked up for me. Bye.