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Mike the Red


I do this just for fun -- but sometimes I take myself a little too seriously. I know life's too short, but -- you know...

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This story is a sequel to Free to Good Home: Talking Pony


Set in post-apocalyptic USA.
After a few years of raising his son, Discord determines that he needs a playmate, so he ventures back to meet up with "Twilight Sparkle" who is very reluctant to oblige him a second time. Both parties discover that everything has its price -- and Michael discovers that things are not as they seem...

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 37 )

Lol I have no idea what I'm reading.

Hmmm I like where this is going

._. derp Twi is probably gonna have one anyway:derpytongue2:

honestly mike, im surprised on not only haw many stories you've written but the fact that they're all branchs off the same beguining. cant w8 for more dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_grin.png

if the view counter is 1 does that mean i viewed first?

either way...
MOAR!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rainbow_Dash.png

1754568 Thanks for your kind words. I'm trying to tie everything together, and hopefully the whole work might be able to stand on its own. :twilightsmile:

:rainbowhuh: tie everythi-
w8 a minute.....:trixieshiftright:
:pinkiegasp: if im thinking what you think your thinking...:derpyderp1:

I said it once i will say it again you never stop amazing me with these chapters

1778247 This next one is going to be a doozy, so watch out! :raritywink:

*stokes where beard used to be*
hmmm... not what i had thought... or maybe it IS...idk...im just gonna keep reading...

I certainly hope all this massive amount of story writing hasnt worn out your creativity pool :twilightsmile: cant w8 for more! :pinkiehappy:

Well Mike you better write even MOAR

Woah! So that's what Celestia meant back then...

1798897 Only in the Alternate Ending. I posted that as a possibility of what could have happened. :twilightsheepish:

1798904 I know, but it just seemed right to say that. :twilightsmile:

Mike if you keep making updates on this I might need a second laptop just to read all the updates for these stories but still good never the less

1809086 Its the truth this new chapter is the first one I read on my NEW laptop so you got lucky your story is the first one that got read on my new laptop

1778247great...i see your amazed and all..but i dont think he needs this every chapter and all..

will there be a possible sequel to this story

2606090 Check out "The Trouble With Time Travel" for the sequel to this story...and thanks again for reading and commenting! :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

So... After reading the alternate ending II... What is going to tell Celestia to Twilight?

Sorry but she died before go to dungeon? After Michael seemed to be okay and if there was a problem she/he could go to infirmary, not to say Celestia disposed the body inmediatly so it's strange.

She dissapeared? After barely manage to walk, defeated the guards, and Celestia and Twilight that was around did not notice?

I wonder if discord gave them those pictures. Seems like something he'd do after she shot down his request for another child. If it turns out in a later chapter he did I am so going to say called it.

Little Eva flubbed the last line of the second verse, and I still can't seem to find what it was exactly she sang, so I kind of half-way figured it out, more or less, but even so, I haven't got it down exactly.

Aren't they on the screen? It's a blooming karaeoke machine for crying out loud! Just read what it says.:facehoof:

1896673 Hey! Writers appreciate positive comments to their stories. It gives them the motivation to keep writing. Wouldn't you apreciate such comments to what you work so hard on?

6497286 You're the first person to comment here in a long time. Wow over a hundred weeks since I was here. 0.0

6497238 The funny thing is, even though that karaoke machine would show the words to the song, that line shows up as a bunch of question marks... :pinkiehappy:

"Wait, what?" I asked as I was disintegrated by the beam of light that came from the amulet. My body was turned into a pile of dust. Ohh, I hate it when that happens!

"Rest easy, Michael, one day you will thank me for what I have done," Celestia said silently to herself.

:unsuresweetie:

one day you will thank me for what I have done

:rainbowderp:

the original epilogue is so lackluster. and alternate ending doesn't finished any of lose end.
and the capability of characters, their personality, and their magic prowess are so different from each other that it it's weird to think of them as as branch timelines.

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The amount of time Michael spent in the dungeon was a great many years -- about 70 or thereabouts -- and it had been more than 10 years since Twilight last visited that pony.
By the time Celestia finally chose to end that pony's life, said pony had become essentially incoherent and insane.

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