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A writer from complex story. A poet I am with considerable plenty for me to share. I am glad, no, thrilled to all and I am hopeful to the rest.
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So far, everything is good!
Reading the lines make me feel like I'm chanting.
Do continue, I'd love to see the other characters described. Everything's in place.
Complete every character? My my, you have quite a task ahead of you. :P
Good luck on it! I enjoyed reading what you had thus far.
Never liked poetry that much. This however, this is good. I think I might just go peruse the local library for some books on poetry...
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Then may I suggest to head into this site: Ponyfiction archinve and find my title of it for the "difficult poetry"
reminiscent of Shakespeare :3
behold as I watch/fave/comment
I thought my pony poetry was good this is magnificent!
I would be much intrested if you where to make a knew poem to describe Luna as (I could be wrong) this poem seems about how Luna was portrayed in the first season.
But she is so more dinamic than this now that we have seen more of her.
I am curious what you could put to words about her royal voice.
I would be much interested if you where to make a knew poem to describe Luna as (I could be wrong) this poem seems about how Luna was portrayed in the first season.
But she is so more dynamic than this now that we have seen more of her.
I am curious what you could put to words about her royal voice.
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That's because I was referring to Luna in the first season. This was posted long time ago but added with a different vise, also to the question I think I could probably make a story about it staring the poet, the moon and the princess.
silly fact: the letter D is my fave letter and alliterations are one of my secret loves and so when I read this line (Smiting upon villains down the drain. Delivering monsters down its blade.) I could not help but wish that it had a single word changed, (demons) in place of (villains).
over all I like this poem but perhaps that is because this level of poetry is well beyond my simple rhymes.
I like the --Separated Poem-- more than the first even though they are similar.
I also could not help but picture it being recited while acting in interpretive dance.
my fave line (Burden heart alone to care of need. Constant reliance to likely deeds,)
I love AJ so much
I love this one almost as much as the Luna one, but could you please help me to understand this line? (The will to teach be greatly value. With mustering ends in ideal duo)
"Magic exceed to yearly days. Enchant profuse to boundless (prevail)," I want to replace it with (accolade) but only for rhyme more than meaning :D
I love this poem. getting old saying that though, but honestly I do.
it may just be because Rarity is not one of my fave ponies
but this poem is my least fave so far.
fave line of all the poems was read in this chapter
(Harmony wielded in their gentle necks. Necklace that symbols of virtues erect.
Arrive and face to monsters at worldly end. Command to shield that fragile these land.)
"gentle necks", that part was beautiful, than I was crushed with "symbols of virtues erect" I could see them shinning with colors in my mind, than the way you used the phrase "worldly end" described in such a short phrase the exact circumstances. well done! bravo!
well I think I need some kind of poet translator.
I understood only half of this poem.
maybe I'm just tired right now?
still loving all the new words and strange ways you use them.
I cant tell if you mentioned the flowers or not.
you have no idea how much this pleases me, rhyming poetry is my bread and butter.
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I love it!
I kept reading this one over and over trying to find a good meter to sing it in.
one question: was the use of the letter (A) twice in this line (That symbols a a scary toon.) and the use of the word (toon) on purpose?
from your other poems I cant imagine you missing something like this so I assume it was.
I might add that I read that part in pinky pies voice as her in mock fear, and studding, it works nicely with the song :D
if by some crazy chance it is a mistake (I cant see how it could be) please don't change it I like it like this
last line was my fave
also you might like this, this poem made me think of it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Pb_ue4S9E4
the animation they used works so well.
spike does Shakespearean Soliloquy.
it's short . . .but great and powerful :D I like it because it's about Trixie and because it uses words I dont know the meaning of lol
I really like this one, the "zeccora" shows through in it
you should do some interpretive renditions of these and post them to youtube.
also Gilda ftw.
She is not my fave character but I like her lots.
i must say this isn't bad, now i don't do poetry much but it's good in my book.
as causal I like.
*Celestia recives the letter*
Celestia:...we're screwed.
Luna:Why?!
Celestia:Because he has a power not many have.
Luna:What Dear Sister?!
Celestia:A power I thought only zebras could control.
Luna:...no....he didn't...
Celestia:Yes.He discovered...poetry.
Luna:NOOOOO!!!
When (or could) you do a spitfire one?
i have done my share of poetry, and i am rather impressed at this one. you were able to hold the main plot together for that long, and i understood who you were talking about even without looking at the title. i agree with Jracob, you could have made it in a wider expanse of Luna, both seasons. but as for a first season, kudos to you!
ill continue to read on.
this was a bit too waring for me in context to pinkie pie. sure she can kick butt, but at the same time, i felt like not enough was mentioned about her being open and making friends with EVERYONE who comes through ponyvile.
great poem, but not pinkie pie enough for me, i didn't laugh, and i was hoping that i would.
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I wanted to tell on each different meanings. To tell more about her personality than her open cheerfulness and making friends.
On the first paragraph explains about making parties, which also relates to the start of making friends.
Second paragraph, meaning fear that isn't real (relating to the first episode of season 1) and that laughter is the key.
Third Paragraph, persistence. Every mare...and donkey, sometimes want to be alone and forgotten, that is when she intervenes, helping their problems.
And the fourth paragraph, reversion. The fear of reverting back to the gloomy version and even though it might happen in some future, she has to endure it.
Hope that explains a lot.
How did you? So many characters! Thats more than five! I can count!