The Poetic Chapters of MLP (Reference)

by Experimenteer

Chapter 2: Party Laughter (Pinkie Pie)

Forever lively for credible trends. Her soul springs into simple bend,
Dancing and carols like daily ends. Her spirit shall lift your blacken bland.
All such plans, décor in perfectly sync. Her artful birthdays will melt in loving heat,
With timing enough to make mischievous trick. A careful caution beneath your feet.

However parties differed from fun and danger. Monsters lurks with a dagger,
Unless power is beyond they've suspect. Monsters hears an ominous laugh.
Voicing hails to pierce that muster. Monsters have loose their number,
Smiting upon villains down the drain. Delivering monsters down its blade.

None may halt or stop her whim. Methods are crush to preserving beam,
Flourished in incredible excite. Torrential spirit against every might.
Witness to feel her everyday tone. Listen to her words that pace each race.
Follow her guidance to this point. And torn astray with splitter half.

Without her friends that boast throughout. She'll stay as despairing as a trout,
Alone wouldn't be enough. Her laughter isn't all of acquiring base.
A tale somehow it obscures. Through appointed pasting,
A story may soon endure. Through impending future.

Comments

[Jrakob]

silly fact: the letter D is my fave letter and alliterations are one of my secret loves and so when I read this line (Smiting upon villains down the drain. Delivering monsters down its blade.) I could not help but wish that it had a single word changed, (demons) in place of (villains).
over all I like this poem but perhaps that is because this level of poetry is well beyond my simple rhymes.

[PonyScribe]

this was a bit too waring for me in context to pinkie pie. sure she can kick butt, but at the same time, i felt like not enough was mentioned about her being open and making friends with EVERYONE who comes through ponyvile.

great poem, but not pinkie pie enough for me, i didn't laugh, and i was hoping that i would.

[Experimenteer]

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I wanted to tell on each different meanings. To tell more about her personality than her open cheerfulness and making friends.
On the first paragraph explains about making parties, which also relates to the start of making friends.
Second paragraph, meaning fear that isn't real (relating to the first episode of season 1) and that laughter is the key.
Third Paragraph, persistence. Every mare...and donkey, sometimes want to be alone and forgotten, that is when she intervenes, helping their problems.
And the fourth paragraph, reversion. The fear of reverting back to the gloomy version and even though it might happen in some future, she has to endure it.

Hope that explains a lot.